Of Cleanliness and Godliness

Of Cleanliness and Godliness, the adage appoints;
God will be proximate to the most cleanly joints.
Now, Craig’s place is clean, I mean, his pad is bright!
And Steve lives on Craig’s left while I’m on the right.

The way that I figure, if that old saying’s true,
Then Steve’s digs are painted a deified hue. 
Steve must be holy as holy can be,
‘Cause he’s next to Craig’s place, and God is not me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 6:32 PM
I love the cleverness in this piece Dean. My mother used to spout those words everytime we kids complained about cleaning. : )
Schiavina Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Excellent!
Wood Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for the feedback Frances. You are the first to say anything. I was wondering if no one liked it or if it went over their heads. Appreciate it, Dean
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