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Of Cleanliness and Godliness

Of Cleanliness and Godliness, the adage appoints; God will be proximate to the most cleanly joints. Now, Craig’s place is clean, I mean, his pad is bright! And Steve lives on Craig’s left while I’m on the right. The way that I figure, if that old saying’s true, Then Steve’s digs are painted a deified hue. Steve must be holy as holy can be, ‘Cause he’s next to Craig’s place, and God is not me!

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:32:00 PM
I love the cleverness in this piece Dean. My mother used to spout those words everytime we kids complained about cleaning. : )
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Date: 7/7/2017 9:49:00 AM
Excellent!
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/7/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback Frances. You are the first to say anything. I was wondering if no one liked it or if it went over their heads. Appreciate it, Dean

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