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Of a Still Winter's Morn

In stillness of a winter morn, A carriage passed me by, Treading a path old and worn, Upon it's wheels sore and dry; The air about had a listlessness, I heard no other noise Than the passing hooves of a steed, And my inner voice... No birds in trees about that house Whose porch I sat-in, ever spoke Early in that break of dawn, So I looked when the silence broke: A little distance away, and it Crawled to an awkward halt; The horse, giving a plunge in the air, Jerked and fumed in water and salt. Out came a lady old-- Worn as the wearied wheel-- Followed by the silken robes Of a beauty most surreal. In all youth then, i never saw A maiden so fair and pure; I watched in awe as the women both, Approached at my door. In ecstasy beheld my heart The temple of this Moon Shrouded by her hair, like night Working up a rune. Smiling, bowing graciously Like simmering warmth in the cold, She spoke to ask which way led To the house of(a name she told)... Still in awe, I arranged for chairs For my visitors to sit; Over cheerful cups of tea, I told what place was it. And before, they took my leave, I thought i had to say, ''Do stop-by this place Once more on thy way'': Those eyes passed a lively glance, As if to say, ''I will'', She finally left on her way And left me standing still... Bright was the day, and the next ones too-- I rested for the Dame: Spring and summer, winter came But she never came...
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Brown Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Picture Frame~moment" contest Akash. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest Akash. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 10:41 AM
AKASH congratulations in FRANK'S contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
Richards Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:01 AM
A lovely poem, Akash! Congratulations on your win!
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Wonderful story you have penned here Akash.Congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 6:27 AM
such lovely meter and charming verse...Soup Mail Congrad's Light & Love
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December 10, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a day x
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Akash. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 11:08 PM
oh,my goodness. she never came back. How sad. it was a very interesting read and I was hoping to see something good happen in the end! Congrats, this was one of the best poems on the list!
Quigley Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:58 PM
A shame. Sounds like a love story in the making. Congratulations
A   Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:05 PM
AKASH,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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