June 8, 2018
~ Sixth Place ~ Premiere Contest: Source of Our Awareness Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
~ Third Place ~ Contest: Verse A Favoured Form, Any Theme Sponsor: Brian Strand
What are you thinking of germinal seed of dynamic animation, do you still understand all without explanation..? the colors you dream in are the nuances of Infinite Love for the nonce, living soul, you will breathe in new lessons through this tender tethering as your seeking thirst is slaked through your skin; for life's osmosis seeps mortal knowledge not implanted at conception with each culmination of every era the Enlightenment is cumulative. Craving to quench a craving quest to reach and taste faultless fruits of the Crown of Divinity— paths' toward perfection perfectly entwined; human womb but a nutshell for a mortal plan in place flesh and blood and free will intact— your immortal blueprint will always be here trust when and while you remember to forget to remember recollections will renew when your mundane drum ceases to thrum and you flash across skies once more in meteoric rise donning your glorifying shine from stars-of-giving-light. In this human lifetime imperfect being you will be nursed; orphan tears scarring dirty cheeks will not overflow your tin cup with naught else to nourish you... those suffering stepping stones led to the sanctity of the last earthly lessons learned.
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