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Oasis, Oblivion, Odyssey Words Poetry Contest

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ODYSSEY

Ahhh… what choice do I have?
Oblivion… so overrated, as so many poets
use this word for centuries…..
Oasis… nice feel to it, but life is not an oasis.

Odyssey then… for life is an odyssey.
Life is a long wandering, a long journey.
As for me, my life is a series of experiences
that gave me knowledge, understanding,
not only of human emotions, behaviors.
It opened me to perceive and discern why
people act the way they do because of their
cultures, family dynamics and characteristics.

My own odyssey gave me the strength to
know me, my strengths and imperfections.
It gave me courage to overcome adversities
and learn from them; accept my failures and
be accountable; use my strength to work on
weaknesses and imperfections; embrace me
and be comfortable in my own skin and most 
of all be thankful, be content and be whole.
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Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:42 AM
- Words of truth beautifully written, Marilene - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Evans Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Happy New Year. hugs to you too.
Alex Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 8:55 PM
"My own odyssey gave me the strength to know me, my strengths and imperfections" - Great writing. Congratulations!
Evans Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 9:28 PM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. I appreciate it. Happy New Year.
La France Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 4:41 PM
Marilene, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
Evans Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Happy New Year, Constance. Thank you for my placement and your compliment. Have a good night.
Farookh Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Highly thought-provoking, Marilene. Loved your take on life's journey.
Evans Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, thank you. Happy New Year. May the new year bring you blessings.
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