Odor Eaters

I made peanut butter and jelly
for Jane whose feet were very smelly,
because they stunk sooo bad
I got darn piping mad...
my lunch stayed away from my belly!

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Vladislav Raven

April 1, 2016 at 2:37 PM

Hi George, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

George Aul

April 2, 2016 at 9:20 AM

Thanks and also congrats on a great write........... George

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 1:32 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write George..

George Aul

April 1, 2016 at 9:49 AM

Thanks and congrats on a fine poem............ George

Poet Destroyer A

March 31, 2016 at 11:53 PM

George, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

George Aul

April 1, 2016 at 9:49 AM

Thank you as always..................... George

Karam Misra

March 31, 2016 at 12:15 PM

And George you write so good About relation between smell and food If the smell is nice Puke cuts no ice And Aul's well with the world it's understood! Loved your Limerick!

George Aul

March 31, 2016 at 5:02 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting............ George

Jan Allison

March 31, 2016 at 11:06 AM

Made me giggle George:-) I've never tired peanut butter and Jelly- (I think US jelly is our Jam) but I think I'll stick with just peanut butter lol:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul

March 31, 2016 at 5:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I wonder how many people didn't feel like eating at all after reading :-) .............. George

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