Odor Eaters

I made peanut butter and jelly for Jane whose feet were very smelly, because they stunk sooo bad I got darn piping mad... my lunch stayed away from my belly!

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/1/2016 2:37:00 PM

Hi George, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

George Aul
Date: 4/2/2016 9:20:00 AM

Thanks and also congrats on a great write........... George

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:32:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write George..

George Aul
Date: 4/1/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thanks and congrats on a fine poem............ George

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 11:53:00 PM

George, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

George Aul
Date: 4/1/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thank you as always..................... George

Karam Misra

Date: 3/31/2016 12:15:00 PM

And George you write so good About relation between smell and food If the smell is nice Puke cuts no ice And Aul's well with the world it's understood! Loved your Limerick!

George Aul
Date: 3/31/2016 5:02:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting............ George

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 11:06:00 AM

Made me giggle George:-) I've never tired peanut butter and Jelly- (I think US jelly is our Jam) but I think I'll stick with just peanut butter lol:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul
Date: 3/31/2016 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I wonder how many people didn't feel like eating at all after reading :-) .............. George