Jenish Somadas Poet Englyn

Ode To the Faded Spring

Heart in melodious mute,
Impressions of my mind fuse,
Eyelids got amazed and pause,
Until you gorgeously passed.

Eloquence of fervid glance,
Plunges in my hollow heart,
Exuberant fragrance danced,
Earth exhibits show so grand.

Lively lives dived into frames,
Divine ink lavishly paint,
Sunny spring swept stifled graves,
Bid a night to spare and fade.


Second Place in Genuine Englyns Poetry Contest sponsored by Beth Evans

Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S SELECT B,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra June 26, 2020 at 2:24 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. My wishes did come true ;) Keep writing and inspiring dear friend. God bless you Jenish Somadas June 26, 2020 at 2:59 AM Thank you Aditi for your wishes and support..Have a great day..

Krish Radhakrishna June 25, 2020 at 1:18 AM Congrats on your win, Jenish! Eloquence of fervid glance, plunges in my hollow heart! Great write Jenish Somadas June 25, 2020 at 1:23 AM Thank you Krish for your kind support.. Have a great day..

Sam Kauffman June 24, 2020 at 12:07 PM What an elegantly expressed picture of spring, Jenish. This poem overflows with dynamic, yet delicate, images. Congratulations on your winning placement! Jenish Somadas June 24, 2020 at 11:34 PM Thank you Sam for your delightful comment..

Paula Goldsmith June 24, 2020 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful picture you have for your wonderful poem. I feel, I can walk down the path. Enjoy your win and day........... Jenish Somadas June 24, 2020 at 11:34 PM Thank you Paula for your delightful comment.. Have a day!!

Beata Agustin June 24, 2020 at 1:48 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I have a vivid picture of spring with your words. God bless you. Jenish Somadas June 24, 2020 at 1:59 AM Thank you Beata for your delightful words.. God bless you too..

Michelle Faulkner June 23, 2020 at 8:48 PM This has a lovely flow, especially 'Exuberant fragrance danced' - congratulations! Jenish Somadas June 24, 2020 at 1:05 AM Thank you Michelle for your delightful comment...

Janice Canerdy June 23, 2020 at 8:36 PM Lovely poem, Jenish. CONGRATS! Janice Jenish Somadas June 24, 2020 at 1:04 AM Thank you Janice..

Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Jenish Jenish Somadas June 16, 2020 at 12:30 AM Thank you Funom..

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:18 PM So pretty, Jenish. the trees in the picture resemble one of my front yard tress how it looks in bloom when in April Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:27 AM Are you coming from the Garden of Eden, having tree like that in your front garden..lol.. Thank you Andrea..

Gershon Wolf June 11, 2020 at 10:44 AM Liltingly lyrical, Jenish… though I wish that Spring would never fade. :) gw Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:26 AM New word for me.. Liltingly.. The wish of the nature is better than ours.. More heat is what we need now.. Thank you Gershon..

Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 9:22 AM Such a musical tale of spring and the romance with nature that blossoms from memories. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you Jenish :) Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:24 AM Thank you Aditi for your wishes.. All your wishes come true..lol..

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 6:34 AM Superb write my friend--splendid imagery. Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Vijay.. Your words are always an inspiration to write more..

Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 4:30 AM A farewell to that beautiful season of spring that sets us up for the coming summer Tom Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:22 AM Yes, Tom.. We are already in the middle of a fierce summer.. The heat of summer made me think about the faded spring..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2020 at 2:03 AM A glorious tribute to life's rebirth expressed in a plethora of captivating imagery, dearest Jenish! Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 4:05 AM Thank you Demetrios for your kind support.. Have a great day..