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Ode To the Faded Spring

Heart in melodious mute,
Impressions of my mind fuse,
Eyelids got amazed and pause,
Until you gorgeously passed.

Eloquence of fervid glance,
Plunges in my hollow heart,
Exuberant fragrance danced,
Earth exhibits show so grand.

Lively lives dived into frames,
Divine ink lavishly paint,
Sunny spring swept stifled graves,
Bid a night to spare and fade.


Second Place in Genuine Englyns Poetry Contest sponsored by Beth Evans

Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S SELECT B,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra Date: 6/26/2020 2:24:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. My wishes did come true ;) Keep writing and inspiring dear friend. God bless you Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/26/2020 2:59:00 AM Thank you Aditi for your wishes and support..Have a great day..

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 6/25/2020 1:18:00 AM Congrats on your win, Jenish! Eloquence of fervid glance, plunges in my hollow heart! Great write Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/25/2020 1:23:00 AM Thank you Krish for your kind support.. Have a great day..

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/24/2020 12:07:00 PM What an elegantly expressed picture of spring, Jenish. This poem overflows with dynamic, yet delicate, images. Congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/24/2020 11:34:00 PM Thank you Sam for your delightful comment..

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/24/2020 11:01:00 AM Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful picture you have for your wonderful poem. I feel, I can walk down the path. Enjoy your win and day........... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/24/2020 11:34:00 PM Thank you Paula for your delightful comment.. Have a day!!

Beata Agustin Date: 6/24/2020 1:48:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I have a vivid picture of spring with your words. God bless you. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/24/2020 1:59:00 AM Thank you Beata for your delightful words.. God bless you too..

Michelle Faulkner Date: 6/23/2020 8:48:00 PM This has a lovely flow, especially 'Exuberant fragrance danced' - congratulations! Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/24/2020 1:05:00 AM Thank you Michelle for your delightful comment...

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/23/2020 8:36:00 PM Lovely poem, Jenish. CONGRATS! Janice Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/24/2020 1:04:00 AM Thank you Janice..

Funom Makama Date: 6/15/2020 3:37:00 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Jenish Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/16/2020 12:30:00 AM Thank you Funom..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2020 6:18:00 PM So pretty, Jenish. the trees in the picture resemble one of my front yard tress how it looks in bloom when in April Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:27:00 AM Are you coming from the Garden of Eden, having tree like that in your front garden..lol.. Thank you Andrea..

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/11/2020 10:44:00 AM Liltingly lyrical, Jenish… though I wish that Spring would never fade. :) gw Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:26:00 AM New word for me.. Liltingly.. The wish of the nature is better than ours.. More heat is what we need now.. Thank you Gershon..

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/11/2020 9:22:00 AM Such a musical tale of spring and the romance with nature that blossoms from memories. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you Jenish :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:24:00 AM Thank you Aditi for your wishes.. All your wishes come true..lol..

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 6:34:00 AM Superb write my friend--splendid imagery. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:22:00 AM Thank you Vijay.. Your words are always an inspiration to write more..

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/11/2020 4:30:00 AM A farewell to that beautiful season of spring that sets us up for the coming summer Tom Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:22:00 AM Yes, Tom.. We are already in the middle of a fierce summer.. The heat of summer made me think about the faded spring..

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/11/2020 2:03:00 AM A glorious tribute to life's rebirth expressed in a plethora of captivating imagery, dearest Jenish! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/11/2020 4:05:00 AM Thank you Demetrios for your kind support.. Have a great day..