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Poetic Form: Ode

Ode to the cosmos - Greeting from Earth

Sponsor: John Anderson

Entry Submitted: 2026 February 22

Contest Judged: 2026 March 26

Contest Placement: 1st Place

Ode to the Cosmos - Greeting from Earth

O, vast expanse of stardust, void, and light,
That burns a hushed symphony through the night,
From trembling earth, a speck of green and blue,
We send our greeting, Cosmos, unto you.
We are your children, born of ancient fire,
Caught in a dance of longing and desire.

We see your nebulae in shades of red,
Where new suns wake upon a starry bed.
We trace the Milky Way’s celestial spine,
And wonder at the wonders that are thine—
The black holes, spinning in their silent gloom,
And comets bring their prophecies of doom.
Yet here, on this small, spinning, vibrant shore,
We gaze above and humbly ask for more.

We breathe the oxygen, a gift of grace,
And send our thoughts into the deeps of space.
Though we are bound to gravity’s firm hand,
Our spirits travel far across the land,
Past Jupiter, where shades of orange sway,
To Andromeda, shining far away.

O, grand abyss, we greet you in the dark,
A tiny, thinking, and passionate spark.
Though we are small, we mirror your great scale,
With love and hope that never seem to fail.
Receive this greeting from our hearts to thee,
A whisper from your vast eternity.
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Dutta Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 8:41 PM
BIG BIG Congrats to win TOP on your well deserved poem. Best Wishes and Blessings
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 11:09 PM
Thanks, Anisha, greatly appreciated.
Anderson Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations for your first place in the "Ode to the Cosmos - Greeting from Earth' Contest. I appreciated your efforts for a rhyming poem, and your attempts to provide a context for the humble Earth. Cheers and Best Wishes
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Thank you for my 1st placement, my friend.
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