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Ode To the Corpsman

"I want my Mommy.I want my Mommy", I heard the young man cry. That's how I made my living. Watching young men die. The boy had taken a bullet, Right around mid-thigh. It cut through his femoral artery. Soon he'd bleed out dry. I took my index finger. I stuck it in the hole. I tried to make a tourniquet, But I couldn't find a pole. I could feel his lifeblood pulsing. I just couldn't make it stop. As the bullets flew around my head, I could hear the pop,pop,pop. My rifles butt exploded. It had taken a direct hit. I found that I was thanking God. I'd found my tourniquet. I prepared the lad for transport, To take him back to base. When I turned around he was dead. He'd taken three rounds in the face. He was gone, so I moved on, Amidst the constant cry. That's how I made my living, Watching young men die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/5/2009 4:16:00 PM
A poignant, terrible look at war, and what perhaps is happening at the moment I write...somewhere, in some land, a young man dies. Well done. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:14:00 PM
This is a tear jerker. I can't imagine what it would be like to be out there to try to do what our young men and now women do. Thanks for this one for I needed the reminder of the service of the deaths of our youth. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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