Ode to the Bedroom Door

You open early morning
to sunlight in a chamber
past the threshold.
I’ve yet to know

what the day may bring
late summer
a calling to live
live again.

The cat roams
the room
after I give it
water and food.
Someone sleeps
in the front room.

I’ve closed you
for now. I must
awaken to what
lies ahead.

The voice of someone
I’ve known calls
then another and another
a chorus of memories—
I’ve never forgotten.

Bedroom door
I’ve closed you
but dreams linger.

The branch still in bloom
waves in the wind
and a sparrow flutters
by the window

and yes

a threshold to embrace
but I can never close
passages to my many lives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 1:06 PM
Wonderful metaphorical poem, Mike. Congratulations on your POTW. Blessings as you open life's doors!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:54 AM
Very nice, Mike! Congrats on POTW!
Rodgers Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 6:20 AM
Hello Mike, I am back because I knew that this was a winner. CONGRATS on POTW! Blessings, Daniel
Smith  Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 3:31 AM
A quietly moving, contemporary ode that turns an ordinary bedroom door into a powerful threshold between sleep and waking, solitude and connection, past and present. The spare lines and gentle pauses create an intimate, meditative rhythm, while the cat, flowering branch, and sparrow ground its memories in vivid daily life. The closing image of “passages to my many lives” is especially resonant—open-hearted, reflective, and beautifully earned. Congratulations on a well earned POTW
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September 8, 2026 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations Mike on having received Poem of the Week for you wonderful Ode… Beryl
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 1:48 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Mike :) - Well done :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 11:53 PM
I hear you got POTW. Wow. Big congrats! 👏
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:08 PM
Dearest Mike, this is so thought provoking and I understand the meaning behind your words. This makes sense in every way- ' I’ve closed you for now. ' It will open again, when the time is right. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful  "Ode to the Bedroom Door" write/story. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win...............
La France Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Mike, wonderfully penned and congratulations on receiving the POTW honor ⭐
Kitchin Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:01 AM
Mike, back to congratulate you on POTW with your wonderful poem.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:00 AM
simply a delightful read. congrats, Mike, on your POTW designation.
Kitchin Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Mike, a wonderful poem full of emotion and nostalgia.
Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 2:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I'm specially delighted with this... "a threshold to embrace but I can never close passages to my many lives." Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 11:28 PM
I adore this one!! A like and a fave
Rodgers Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:39 AM
Hello Mike, this is a deeply reflective masterclass in domestic stillness and interior depth. I think the poem's power comes from the tension between the physical door closing for privacy or focus and the mind's door remaining forever open. Such a subtle and beautifully rich piece of work. Blessings, Daniel
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