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Ode To the Beatles' Song Stuck In My Head

Strawberry fields.
I want to go there
where giraffes in art class
form human shapes
out of vanilla candle wax.

Surreal like a Dali painting
with melting clocks
strewn over large rocks
where nothing is real, 
but not so unbelievable either.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 18, 2011 at 5:35 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dawnell. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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