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Ode To Pamela

Ode to Pamela

Now that you have left me for reason,
I am a man of passed-out desires
And passed over dreams

I have unlearnt to find safe line
Between teasing and pleasing you.
I am yet to learn the difference
Between bare-breasts & fashionable breasts.

I have crossed to the other side
And I can’t ever go back.
I caressed your breasts all along the day,
Planted my affection on your lips
Surely it will stay there forever.

I never treated you a subordinate eve
You were only privileged to get pleasure
You never got the pain of childbirth from me
I t was I who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden.
Committing adultery in my old age.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/5/2010 5:57:00 AM

A profound discussion here ... and the poetic repartee is infinite with meanings. A master crafting of the craft

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2010 8:23:00 PM

Yes, Andrea she was very young

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2010 2:42:00 PM

wow, very sincere and powerful writing about Pamela. Was she quite young then? I enjoyed this. LUv, andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/30/2010 4:29:00 AM

Oops! Nice write. Difficult situation. My heart goes out to all of you. I enjoyed reading your words, today. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts with us through your poetry. And thank you for your recent comments on my work. Smiles, Dane Ann

Constance La France

Date: 3/27/2010 7:23:00 PM

Very nicely written... for my contest ...In Search of the Human Mind.. your assignment is childhood...

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/27/2010 2:43:00 PM

A real good piece..well-written...thanks for reading and leaving comments on my work....I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf.. ....Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/25/2010 8:31:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. It is a topic and nothing to do with real life.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2010 5:59:00 PM

Sad write...Sounds as though written about one who has some regrets..I hope that it is a topic and not real life...If real life, I hope that things work out for you and you forgive yourself for your mistakes and go forward..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/24/2010 9:59:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your soul with us. Eating the forbidden fruit has put you into a situation. The thing is you think you crossed over but why can't you go back to the other side. If you really love this person and want her back-then yes you can change. Never think your hands are tied. God Bless Phyl