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Ode To Pamela

Ode to Pamela Now that you have left me for reason, I am a man of passed-out desires And passed over dreams I have unlearnt to find safe line Between teasing and pleasing you. I am yet to learn the difference Between bare-breasts & fashionable breasts. I have crossed to the other side And I can’t ever go back. I caressed your breasts all along the day, Planted my affection on your lips Surely it will stay there forever. I never treated you a subordinate eve You were only privileged to get pleasure You never got the pain of childbirth from me I t was I who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden. Committing adultery in my old age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 5:57:00 AM
A profound discussion here ... and the poetic repartee is infinite with meanings. A master crafting of the craft
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:23:00 PM
Yes, Andrea she was very young
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:42:00 PM
wow, very sincere and powerful writing about Pamela. Was she quite young then? I enjoyed this. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:29:00 AM
Oops! Nice write. Difficult situation. My heart goes out to all of you. I enjoyed reading your words, today. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt thoughts with us through your poetry. And thank you for your recent comments on my work. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/27/2010 7:23:00 PM
Very nicely written... for my contest ...In Search of the Human Mind.. your assignment is childhood...
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Date: 3/27/2010 2:43:00 PM
A real good piece..well-written...thanks for reading and leaving comments on my work....I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf.. ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:31:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. It is a topic and nothing to do with real life.
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:59:00 PM
Sad write...Sounds as though written about one who has some regrets..I hope that it is a topic and not real life...If real life, I hope that things work out for you and you forgive yourself for your mistakes and go forward..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your soul with us. Eating the forbidden fruit has put you into a situation. The thing is you think you crossed over but why can't you go back to the other side. If you really love this person and want her back-then yes you can change. Never think your hands are tied. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Dr Ram. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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