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Quote: Nature is flawed yet flawless, the ground likes your toes, and that your ponytail endears the breeze. (By Poet) Sunset evolves into a dust cloud. As the colors shift, the trees become dreary. In the wee hours, a drumbeat of loud sirens howled. As the sun sets, bright glossy white clouds fall utterly. Not Beyond the earth or screens. Nature, at her finest, is mixture of flowers and greens. The lofty trees wore a white cloak floating the scenes. Rather than snarling down the hill, they took it slowly. Snow was a curse, nature was a mystery. Ecosystem plants, alike humans, can mortify. Even clueless people may now grasp the global natural crowd. Men must live in congruity with nature and work unweary. Nature and mind are always gleans. Let's save colorful flowers swing in the homely. Written: July 15, 2021 Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 7/29/2022 4:17:00 AM
Nature has so much to offer and men should live in congruity with Nature! Beautifully written !
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Date: 8/17/2021 8:38:00 AM
Lassad, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look wonderful, well done. Your chosen image is beautiful as is your quote ~Constance
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. I Love Both. Today, be blessed.....................
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:14:00 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:50:00 AM
Your poem is very expressive and powerful in its message about mankind's need to respect nature. Janice
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Date: 7/16/2021 12:03:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, indeed we need to take care and respect nature because we won't be able to stay alive for a second without it.
Date: 7/16/2021 5:20:00 AM
'Nature and mind are always entwined' a lovely thought....
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Date: 7/16/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Delice, have a peaceful evening.
Date: 7/15/2021 2:26:00 PM
Lovely ode to nature--very well executed, Lasaad. Best for win.
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Date: 7/15/2021 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay; your kind words are always uplifting and appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2021 2:09:00 PM
So true Lasaad man should work with nature and not against her A well written ode to nature and mother earth. Best of luck Tom
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Date: 7/15/2021 6:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom, your nice words are so encouraging and that's true, man should work with nature not against it.
Date: 7/15/2021 2:03:00 PM
- A beautiful poem ... and photo ... I have such flowers in my garden ... pretty :) - Best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/15/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise, your nice comment is a plus to my poem..// My kindest regards to you Anne-Lise
Date: 7/15/2021 1:22:00 PM
Brilliantly composed poem for the contest. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/15/2021 6:30:00 PM
Appreciate your wonderful comment Victor, blessings and best regards my friend
Date: 7/15/2021 11:23:00 AM
Truly wonderful Lasaad. You paint such a vividly colorful picture of Mother Nature's glory with your creative imagery! You are so right - we cannot be "clueless" about our jobs as stewards of beauty in nature. Best wishes for the contest and many blessings to you!
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam; your preciuos comment shed more allure on my poem, blessings, and kindest regards for you, my good friend.

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