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Ode To Nature

Quote: Nature is flawed yet flawless, the ground likes your toes, and that your ponytail endears the breeze. (By Poet) 
                       
                        Sunset evolves into a dust cloud.
            As the colors shift, the trees become dreary.
In the wee hours, a drumbeat of loud sirens howled.
As the sun sets, bright glossy white clouds fall utterly.

                        Not Beyond the earth or screens.
Nature, at her finest, is mixture of flowers and greens.
The lofty trees wore a white cloak floating the scenes.

      Rather than snarling down the hill, they took it slowly.                 
            Snow was a curse, nature was a mystery.      
                        Ecosystem plants, alike humans, can mortify.

Even clueless people may now grasp the global natural crowd.
            Men must live in congruity with nature and work unweary.
      Nature and mind are always gleans.
                         Let's save colorful flowers swing in the homely.


Written: July 15, 2021

Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest  
 Sponsored by: Constance La France
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George Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 4:17 AM
Nature has so much to offer and men should live in congruity with Nature! Beautifully written !
La France Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Lassad, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look wonderful, well done. Your chosen image is beautiful as is your quote ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. I Love Both. Today, be blessed.....................
Alex Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 8:14 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
Canerdy Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Your poem is very expressive and powerful in its message about mankind's need to respect nature. Janice
Poet Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Thanks for your kind words, indeed we need to take care and respect nature because we won't be able to stay alive for a second without it.
Skelly Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 5:20 AM
'Nature and mind are always entwined' a lovely thought....
Poet Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Delice, have a peaceful evening.
Pandit Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Lovely ode to nature--very well executed, Lasaad. Best for win.
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay; your kind words are always uplifting and appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:09 PM
So true Lasaad man should work with nature and not against her A well written ode to nature and mother earth. Best of luck Tom
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Thank you so much, Tom, your nice words are so encouraging and that's true, man should work with nature not against it.
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:03 PM
- A beautiful poem ... and photo ... I have such flowers in my garden ... pretty :) - Best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:28 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise, your nice comment is a plus to my poem..// My kindest regards to you Anne-Lise
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Brilliantly composed poem for the contest. Best for a win.
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Appreciate your wonderful comment Victor, blessings and best regards my friend
Kauffman Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Truly wonderful Lasaad. You paint such a vividly colorful picture of Mother Nature's glory with your creative imagery! You are so right - we cannot be "clueless" about our jobs as stewards of beauty in nature. Best wishes for the contest and many blessings to you!
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thank you so much, Sam; your preciuos comment shed more allure on my poem, blessings, and kindest regards for you, my good friend.
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