Ode To My Gerbil

I’m scum, I know, I am an ass
I knew through cardboard you could pass

You chewed and chewed a great big hole,
I wish I knew you had a soul

You ran and laughed, but what you saw
It stomped you flat, it was a paw

That cat, he smirked and ate you raw
He stuffed you in his great big maw

My dear sweet babe, I won’t forget,
Your tiny life and what you met

The fault is mine, and I must pay,
Though when and how, I cannot say

The day will come, my life’s all done,
Until that time I’ll have no fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Oh dear what a tragic ending to a little gerbil - enjoyed your sad tale:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Good one Susan. ..slat9
Mcdermott Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:47 PM
?? thank you
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