Ode To Mother Ganga

No mere river, thou art nation’s heartbeat,
That you came from heaven may be a myth,
Not that for common good ye fell beneath,
For centuries ye lift people’s spirit.

Let me call thee India’s stand-in sub soul,
O Brahma-vari, heaven’s holy waters,
Thou worshipped art in thy all as a whole,
I bow to Thee, Holiest of all Daughters.

Many a meditating muni’s mind 
Mused were by thy serene, calming presence,
And far from the humdrum of mundane grind,
Shelter have found at thy banks for long hence.

King Bhagirath’s penance once brought ye here,
In penitence to wash ancestors’ sins,
With this hoary burden of long ye steer,
We need a new Bhagirath ye to cleanse.

Ye had, we know, condescended to come,
Known as Brahma’s haughtiest of daughters, 
Boasting of ‘my cascading flood waters’,
Shiva tamed thee, taught a lesson wholesome. 

Sad, mere rituals seem all that remain
Today, wreaking ‘pon thy soul vast damage,
Yet, all this done is in thy holy name,
Ye sure suffer, suffer in silent rage.

A holy thee flows in all us within,
We need not come to thee to wash our sin,
Bathe nor worship, sully thy soul so clean, 
But people are what they have always been.

O Mother, under thy sons’ sins ye moan 
As ye thyself need a bath of thy own. 
A poet was so pained and hurt to call: 
O Ganga, why ye care to flow at all! ____________________________________________
Brahma-vari in Sanskrit means (holy) water from Brahma, the supreme creator. Bhagirath (Sanskrit: ?????, Bhagiratha), a legendary king of Ikshvaku dynasty who brought the Sacred River Ganges (personified as the Hindu River Goddess Ganga) to earth from heaven to liberate his ancestors and Sagar’s sons from sins.

Ode |16.05.2021|
Topic: river, mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 6/9/2021 2:17:00 PM
Aniruddha, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE WEEK with your wonderful write, peace _Constance
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Date: 6/8/2021 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on potd. Wonderful write. Last two para I fully agree. This site has problem. Anything in Hindi becomes question mark.
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:56:00 PM
It is sad a poetry site can't read 'Bhagirath' written in Hindi, or is there something I miss?
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Date: 6/7/2021 8:31:00 AM
FAVING this... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/7/2021 8:30:00 AM
Oh my... How come I missed reading this amazing poetic gem.. What a great tribute to our holy Matha Ganga. Your poem echoes many a poets' voice from our nation, including mine. How true isn't it that Her pure soul is damaged beyond repair.. due to Her son's sins... Generally, it is understood through our holy books that towards the end of 'kalyug'..all our major rivers will dry up..which is SO painful and sad... my hearty congrats to a very talented poet.. enjoy the honor of your well deserving POTW.God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 6/6/2021 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the week, a magnificent write Aniruddha… Belle
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Date: 6/6/2021 11:07:00 AM
BIG congrats on poem of the week, Aniruddha. Well deserved accolades!
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Date: 6/6/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A creative story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings..................
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Date: 6/6/2021 6:17:00 AM
Revisiting to say congratulations. Wow! I loved this poem - it's a masterpiece. Glad it is chosen as POTW. It's magnificent! I am fortunate to understand all the references and words in Sanskrit. Thank you so much, Dear Poet, this needed to be shared among our talented poetic community. Fave for me. Love and best wishes ~Mala
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Date: 6/3/2021 4:05:00 PM
This is a masterpiece from a master of ode poems!! Description is flawless!! What am I going to say? Mala is definitely right! This is a fav for me!
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Date: 6/3/2021 3:13:00 PM
Dear Poet, I am really mesmerized reading this wonderful Ode. I understand all your reference-words in Sanskrit. The message is so deep and profound - your poem is absolutely brilliant. The Ode form which adorns this exceptional poem, is perfect for carrying such a great message about the sacred river. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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