Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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Written: June 24, 2022
Submitted on October 7, 2022 to:
Placed 8th: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 16 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney

Poem of the day on June 26,2022
Placed 9th: A Brian Strand Premier Choice
Placed 10th: Dewdrops Premier Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Angel L Villanueva
Rhymes: ABAABB CDCCDD EFEEFF GHGGHH
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Syllables in each stanza: 868886
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Ode To Dewdrops

You hang there on the rise of dawn
Bending twigs where you cling,
Glistening gems on sunlit lawn,
Where I greet you before you're gone,
Before my passions forlorn ding
While you gleam rays of spring.

How long dear will you glint and glow
Upon vibrant realm green,
My heart and I would like to know
For zephyrs of west will soon blow
To dethrone you from where you preen;
Oh! force of gale is mean.

How ardent you paint golden morn
Blushing on canvas gray;
Glinting rays my sight you adorn,
Assuaging grievous yore lovelorn
As verdant limbs gentle winds sway
Waltzing with lucent day.

Time has risen to bid goodbye,
Yet, you flinch, loath to part,
As sun paints arc in gamboge dye
When a fervent tear sparks your eye,
Heartening warmth love-vibes impart
Vowing to cure my heart.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler June 27, 2023 at 12:03 PM Breathless loveliness, wonder and delight in every line, Vijay. Warmest congratulations. :)

James Inman October 26, 2022 at 7:26 PM What a wonderful write Vijay. Your rhymes are unique and well thought out and the overall voice of your poem is gentle and warm. I like this very much.

Susan Ashley October 22, 2022 at 9:19 AM Dear Vijay, the graceful elegance of your exquisite poem never fails to lift me up and away! It's such a pleasure for my heart's imagination to be reunited with your enchanting and evocative imagery once again. My appreciation for the vivid depth of the piece grows with every read. Your artistry shines with soulful beauty. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Mark Toney October 13, 2022 at 8:11 PM Vijay, I love the last three lines: "When a fervent tear sparks your eye, Heartening warmth love-vibes impart Vowing to cure my heart." Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 17 has already started. Vijay Pandit October 14, 2022 at 5:12 AM Much appreciate, Mark, you taking the time to sponsor this contest and spending time to write detailed comments. Many thanks.

Arjun Jangid August 23, 2022 at 9:08 AM Dewdrops paint golden morning but beauty of nature paint by you. Lovely

Andrew John August 23, 2022 at 4:21 AM Gleam of rays, a force of gale, a golden dawn. So much to absorb from this lovely piece, Vijay. Thank you.

Robertina B. August 18, 2022 at 11:19 AM Congratulations Vijay, on the top 100! Such a breathtaking write! Absolutely enjoyed .. Has a beautiful flow! Many blessings to you, my friend..

Mystic Rose Rose August 13, 2022 at 2:44 PM Congrats Vijay in making it to the top 100 poems, lovely as ever !

Tani Sharma August 11, 2022 at 12:42 AM Beautiful poem. Let’s bring out the best memories with our brothers and sisters by participating in the "Brother - Sister Memories" contest by StoryMirror. It is completely free. Link to participate - https://sm-s.in/89XqJKD

Heidi Sands August 10, 2022 at 2:25 PM Congratulations for your #1 placement on the 100 Best New Poems List with this beautiful poem Vijay :)

Alexis Y. August 10, 2022 at 11:29 AM WoW! Vijay, This is just breathtaking! Your imagery and content is top of the line! Congratulations for all the accolades you have gotten for this well written poem. Especially for placing number 1, in the top 100 new poems list. Well done my talented friend. Have a nice day-Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler July 14, 2022 at 7:19 AM This is a fabulous write Vijay. Your use of vocabulary to express the beauty of the coming day is inspiring. Linda

Regina Mcintosh July 11, 2022 at 2:43 AM Oh, amazing writing. I just adore this one. I do love dew! God bless you kind friend. Love, Gina

Mv Venkataraman July 10, 2022 at 1:00 AM You have made a tiny dew drop get such a warm welcome with a highly descriptive language to prove not only your great vocabulary, but also how dew gives you merry! Vijay Pandit July 10, 2022 at 2:09 PM So very kind of you. Much appreciate--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 8, 2022 at 11:20 PM Oops Vijay suppose to be to our LIVES not loves, but that probably would work too. LOL Vijay Pandit July 9, 2022 at 11:57 AM True. Thanks again.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 8, 2022 at 11:17 PM You are so worthy of the honors given you, not only for this fantastic poem. You constantly add beauty to our loves by your words. Word not only in poems but in the comments you've give me in the past, and others. Congratulations!!!! Vijay Pandit July 9, 2022 at 11:57 AM So very kind of you Barbara. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong July 6, 2022 at 8:43 PM You paint nature with your gracious words into a glorious painting Vijay. This is a beauty! I am very happy to see it at the top of the best new poems list. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2022 at 10:10 AM I am doing much better and can drive again. Thank you my dear friend. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit July 9, 2022 at 11:56 AM Thank you my friend, Hope you are felling much better. Many thanks, Connie. Sending good wishes your way.

Liam Mcdaid July 6, 2022 at 3:26 PM every drop has a weight and value in your words beautifully painted piece Vijay Pandit July 9, 2022 at 11:55 AM Thank you Liam--much appreciate.

Sherry Beck July 6, 2022 at 7:17 AM A Canvas Master Piece! Vijay Pandit July 6, 2022 at 8:34 AM Thank you Sherry--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Karam Misra July 5, 2022 at 10:47 PM Congratulations on a superb poem and your placement, though personally I feel it could have been placed higher. The imagery and emotions shine through in this masterfully crafted poem. Have faved it to read it again and again. Vijay Pandit July 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM So glad you visited with your kind feedback. Many thanks for your FAVE and insightful feedback.

Paulette Calasibetta July 4, 2022 at 10:06 AM You imagery evokes a masterpiece on nature's canvas! Brilliant! :)Paulette Vijay Pandit July 6, 2022 at 8:32 AM Thank you Paulette. Much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex July 4, 2022 at 5:07 AM Great description. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit July 4, 2022 at 1:21 PM Thank you Christuraj.

Valsa George July 3, 2022 at 7:18 AM Back to you with Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest, Vijay ! Vijay Pandit July 4, 2022 at 1:21 PM Thank you Valsa.

Sara Kendrick July 3, 2022 at 6:35 AM Back with congrats on your wonderful winner. Way to go. Sara Vijay Pandit July 4, 2022 at 1:21 PM Much appreciate your visit Sara--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2022 at 6:05 AM Congratulations for your win in Brian Strand’s contest! Vijay Pandit July 4, 2022 at 1:20 PM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

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