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Ode To Antique Tree Without Leaves

A bare tree without offering any shade, haunts me... It wishes to shelter birds that are no longer here..., This tree still conceives itself shady and fruitful... Ponders of when it was a mother that harbored puppies... Night against day passes... Today, phantasmagoria reigns... I ponder if the former time was suspended, so i feel a warm smell, as if this time still had color... ! Observing such an antique vegetable delirium... !

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Date: 10/18/2021 12:08:00 PM
Hello alaka, I like the way you use your imagination in this poem. Salute Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2021 3:29:00 PM
xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2021 3:28:00 PM
Hello alaka, you are welcome. I am glad you like my commentary. Salute Darlene
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Date: 10/18/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thanks dear, i loved your commentary...xxxxoooo salute alkas

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