Ode To Antique Tree Without Leaves

A bare tree
without offering any shade,
haunts me...
 It wishes to shelter birds
that are no longer here...,
This tree still conceives itself
shady and fruitful...
Ponders of when it was
  a mother that harbored puppies...
Night  against day passes...
Today, phantasmagoria reigns...
I ponder if the former time
 was suspended, so i feel
a warm smell,
  as if this time
still had color... !
 Observing such an antique
   vegetable delirium... !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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October 18, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Hello alaka, I like the way you use your imagination in this poem. Salute Darlene
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October 18, 2021 at 3:29 PM
xxxx-oooo.
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October 18, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Hello alaka, you are welcome. I am glad you like my commentary. Salute Darlene
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October 18, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thanks dear, i loved your commentary...xxxxoooo salute alkas
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