Carolyn Devonshire Poet Ode

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Ode to

Abraham Lincoln

Ode To Abraham Lincoln

Imagine studying by firelight
Mastering lessons till late at night

Trudging through deep Illinois snow
No matter how cold, to school he’d go

Rising up as the best leaders do
To promoting equality, he stayed true

Debating Douglas in 1858
Defeating the incumbent on that date

Running for president to free each slave
Charting even then, the path to his grave

A noble quest for one born poor
Never a chance to sip life’s grandeur

He fought for his goal and he won
But sealed his fate; it was done

Assassin’s bullet claimed Lincoln’s life
Leaving a nation in sadness rife

But the equality he sought
To a healing nation, he brought

It’s said our best are doomed to die young
But his achievements have not gone unsung




January 27, 2020
Sponsor:  Sheri Fresonke Harper
Contest:  Ode to a President, Politician or Leader, Past or Present

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Jack Horne July 19, 2020 at 10:16 AM a great man & I now know much more after reading your poem! This deserved a 1st place in any contest

Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2020 at 2:53 PM Congratulations on your win. A life told in a poem with a few lines. A great write.

Connie Marcum Wong March 4, 2020 at 10:08 AM This is first place in my eyes Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. xxoo

Alexis Y. March 4, 2020 at 4:45 AM Hi Carolyn, I see you and Andrea both picked “ Lincoln”. He was a good president! Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

John Watt March 2, 2020 at 11:45 PM Carolyn, I love the line "Charting even then, the path to his grave"... sad, but true. Excellent ode to the great man and 16th President. Congrats on your win ~ John

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 2, 2020 at 10:40 PM Congratulations Caroline on your 6th place win in the Ode for a Leader or Politician Past or Present contest. You did an awesome job explaining your admiration, but punctuation matters, too. Thanks for entering, enjoyed reading it. Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2020 at 1:20 PM Thank you very much, Sheri. I've always loved Lincoln.

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2020 at 5:27 PM Awesome. I did him too. Just did not post it yet. He was only good Republicans we ever had probably.

Michelle Faulkner February 10, 2020 at 1:05 PM This is an inspiring ode, equal to the inspiring legacy he left, best wishes for the contest, Carolyn!

Juliet Ligon February 6, 2020 at 3:00 PM Great choice for a presidential ode. Well written.

Connie Marcum Wong February 3, 2020 at 4:02 PM Wow Carolyn! You picked the perfect president to celebrate in this month of his birthday. He is a hero to me and my favorite president. Your poem celebrates his humble life and many achievements beautifully! This is a Fave for me and I hope it receives a top award in the contest! I love it! Congratulations on becoming a Lifetime member and big kudos to the poet who gifted you the membership! xxoo Carolyn Devonshire February 3, 2020 at 4:07 PM Thanks, Connie! I read Dale Carnegie's "Lincoln the Unknown" in fifth grade and fell in love with him. I wish he was on the ballot this year!

Gershon Wolf February 2, 2020 at 6:46 PM An amazing person was Lincoln. How he managed to pull this nation together through such a grueling war is beyond me. We could use him around today. Wonderful ode to Honest Abe, Carolyn. Great contest entry. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie January 31, 2020 at 4:33 PM Hello Caroline … possibly the best known president here in Australia. To fight for his beliefs and eventually die for them makes Lincoln a never to be forgotten hero for so many. A great ode Caroline - Lindsay

Leroy Baker January 31, 2020 at 12:39 PM Young Man's Lyceum from 1838 Joshua Speed Lincoln as a Lawyer----------- Despised and Rejected by both Parties

Panagiota Romios January 31, 2020 at 11:39 AM Great poem! Best wishes Panagiota xx

Gordon Mcconnell January 30, 2020 at 3:33 PM Such a fine piece Carolyn, indeed Lincoln was a great leader and pity we lack his like today. Hope all well, Blessings, Gordon

Paul Callus January 30, 2020 at 11:13 AM Your ode to President Lincoln highlights the main points of this great man, Carolyn. The end couplet sums it all up...he will be remembered for many more years to come. ~ Hugs // paul Carolyn Devonshire January 30, 2020 at 5:35 PM Thanks, Paul. Coming from humble beginnings, his success has always seemed amazing.

Vijay Pandit January 29, 2020 at 3:23 PM You chose a great man to honor who changed the course of history for our nation. The fight for his cause wasn't easy but he never gave up and paid for it with his life. So eloquently you expressed his achievements, Carolyn. A winning poem you wrote, my friend. Carolyn Devonshire January 29, 2020 at 3:54 PM Lincoln is among our best presidents and students still study him today. The fact that he came from humble beginnings only adds to his luster. Thanks for reading, Vijay. I'll check your page.

Tom Cunningham January 29, 2020 at 3:07 PM A glowing tribute to President Lincoln Caroline. Very well composed, he was indeed a great man and a great inspiration. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well. Tom Carolyn Devonshire January 29, 2020 at 3:13 PM Thank you, Tom. Lincoln is, without doubt, my favorite president. He stands for what the Republican Party believed during his lifetime. I also like Jimmy Carter. Thanks for reading. I'll check to see if you have any new poetry. (Been missing your limericks lately) Hugs, Carolyn