Ode On the Clan's Iroko Tree

(for: them who are ever there!)

these branches and roots
that cord to the grave ancients
should be free from man’s swords!
both oracle and priest held for days …

I 
Your voice speaks in the silence of the night
To the deep still shady earth
That once held a great zest for our childhood
Here in the once thick wooded land
Where progenitors strewed their rustic huts
Yes! where, sang tho’ unseen those sonorous kin-spirits.

2 
Ah! Happy and keen folks were the ancients, then;
But their sons? what a sad lot, now! even
Demented hearts aching from those drinks of dizzy times
Raw anguish, sorrow, painful hemlocks of death-lines,
The slow songs that tune softly to the mirthful graves
That still hold the ancestors like prisoners in the wild caves.

3 
O! for your unravished wave of primal welcome,
That bade the sonorous weaver come
To make loud greeting of blue azure with song-fleet
O! for such uudecoded song that for the sagging flesh bear ointment
Secret balm from the rhyming unsteady palm leaves of the winds
That flute clearly to ancestors those eternal silent songs.

4 
Known are those festal spirits of your night
From whom many lives readily spring forth:
Mused thru’ the voices of strong mortal compeers –
Priests, priestesses, praise-singers, warriors, dancers!
That with gusto, flounder across the space of time;
O, for those festal moments of flush! o, for the celestial clime!

5 
You are the unseen bridge of the world,
Like Nturukpa, that elder amongst our ferry trees;
Your bark exhumes the bright colours of the past;
And carried thru’ the festal wings of your night
We desire to be mused to the ethereal clime;
Of uncurbed equanimity and euphoria of the divine.

6 
I now know the anguish of these festal spirits
Who take refuge on the water-void banks
Of the topmost branches and leaves;
I now know the noise of their feasts in sacrifices:
Doleful sacrifices in the gods’ swollen foot!
Then adieu! adieu! from the cloyed humans in advent!

7 
O farewell! with all your festal spirits,
Who coaxed to the night of sacrifices, priests,
Priestesses, dancers, praise-singers, warriors of the land;
Adieu! with these cold celebrations and coax-throated songs heard,
Thru’ the voice and echoes of rain’s thunder,
In the day of the panther and his noble twin, the hunter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/16/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Canny on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Free Verse". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:58:00 AM
This is such a great poem, Canny, and I am so pleased to see your placement in Catie's contest. Congratulations, my friend. Well-deserved! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful writing here, Canny !! It would be amazing to know what the trees (or Standing People as I like to call them ... smile ... ) could tell us if they spoke ... such awesome history in your corner of the world !! Thanks for your recent comments and for bringing your talents to PoetrySoup!! Keep up the great writing !!
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:52:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Saying good by to ones ancestors and laying them to rest is not easy...Sara
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:49:00 AM
This is just so wonderful. You're right on the money with this one. I just love stanza # 5. There is a lot of history embedded there which need to be unraveled. The images in this masterpiece are just marvelous. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:42:00 PM
The past has much more influence on the present than we think and somehow you are aware of this. When one knows, one can make their own karma and say adieu to those anxious spirits wishing to continue their earthly demises from the unseen world through those living. Interesting write! Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:25:00 PM
Interesting write in this one.Very elaborate and well planned thought out work..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:52:00 PM
The joy of your nation's ancestors reigns in the first few verses, Canny. How sad it must be to compare the legacy of these ancient times to the current state of affairs. Your imagery provokes our imagination. We can see the dancers, hear the praise singers, but we are also transported to the present with images that sadden our hearts. How sad to bid adieu to the "festal spirits." They must look upon us with wonder when they see suffering and pain. Brilliant writing, Canny! Love, Carolyn
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