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he writes an ode and sees her kissing a man - - crumpled paper For Skat’s Ode contest

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/14/2014 6:49:00 AM

A fine Ode and congratulations on the fine win Jack

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2014 2:29:00 PM

JACK, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/15/2013 7:54:00 AM

Haiku King I'd say.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2013 3:38:00 PM

hey, you are on a roll with these haiku!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/5/2013 6:26:00 PM

oh i can so see this one happening...nice strong image! :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/4/2013 6:13:00 AM

sad write Jack gl in contest Ty for your review on Men I have been ill so am far behind on answering remarks. Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/3/2013 10:33:00 PM

wow, Jack this one is kind painful... and sad imagery why must one break love.... LINDA

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/3/2013 8:47:00 PM

Perfect, this is a perfect write for the contest my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2013 12:44:00 PM

I can feel the emotion expressed in this one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara