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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 January 27
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barely adult male lacking abilities needs aimless future trials~ driven working family young man dies by drunk driver

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Date: 1/28/2024 6:54:00 AM

Thought-provoking dear William. So much to learn, so far to go, then gone in a split second. Sad for all parties. :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/28/2024 7:19:00 AM

Yes, a pointed out meaningful phrase. Thanks, Linda. Aloha, William

Date: 1/27/2024 6:51:00 AM

oh, such a tragic ending to your Tanka..well done, sir.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/27/2024 2:46:00 PM

Hey, Sara, grasping simple phrases, aphormsims and the likes to expound its revelant meanings, my friend. Aloha, William