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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 January 27
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barely adult male lacking abilities needs aimless future trials~ driven working family young man dies by drunk driver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fowler Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Thought-provoking dear William. So much to learn, so far to go, then gone in a split second. Sad for all parties. :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Yes, a pointed out meaningful phrase. Thanks, Linda. Aloha, William
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