Oddly Optimistic

Hope and a prayer, a dollar to spare.
A dream to one day breath in millionaire.
By my calculations, it's always the same.
You just cannot win if your not in the game.

A new house, a car, perhaps travel far.
Try not to spend all my time at the bar.
Buy a new mattress to continue sweet dreams.
Holding tight to the hope, that it's all that it seems.

So why should it be that the winner is me?
When so many have payed in so I can live free.
In life there are winners and sometimes their not.
Some say that the tricks being glad what you got.

Well I have not won, so I do not know.
What it feels like to finally have all that dough.
I pinch every penny and squeeze every dime.
And spend my last dollar hoping this is the time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/2/2013 3:18:00 PM
I broke down and bought three... only one matched number lol 6 bucks down the drain... me left wishing I'd bought chocolate instead lol I like your poem and smiled and felt it's pain lol Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 5/31/2013 2:49:00 PM
Oh Boy you speak or should i say you write for millions of us losers,,,great poetry...
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:30:00 AM
just stopping by to say HI. Time for bed for this knucklehead.
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Date: 5/26/2013 4:46:00 PM
Many have given so much so that our lives can be so much fuller than in past generations..We still want to have the best there is though..Enjoyed reading your very expressive work about a great topic..Thanks for your visit..Yes, those Hummingbird wings would be a killer..Sara
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Date: 5/26/2013 4:09:00 PM
I guess all the lotto players are just dreamers. Probably if I lived in a state that allowed it, I'd be doing it too. Good to see you get up this new post. I was just going offline now. Hope you are enjoying your day. Great seeing you and reading your fun comments. Luv, Andrea
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