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Oddly Neurotic

I told my hubby I would never get a puppy ever again, but hey, aren’t they supposed to be a woman’s best friend? So I scooped up Brady in my arms one warm June day, brought him home with my daughter Ella to laugh and play. He was a shy pup, until the day he seemed to go crazy, started gnawing fiercely on his leg, it really did amaze me! He’d fall asleep on and off with his leg in his mouth; weird! him becoming oddly neurotic like us I really feared! I gently went to him to pick up his sobbing wet puppy paw, and guess what, you’ll never believe what I actually saw! Crunchy peanut butter embedded up and down his thighs, I should'a never got a puppy! (I very soon realized.) I guess that afternoon Ella was making peanut butter and jelly, her hands got all messy and she went to pet his golden belly. He chewed in between naps and even fell asleep that night, with his back leg in his snout holding it peanut buttery tight! *true story about my puppy (he's 9 months old) the picture says it all* February 28, 2018

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Date: 3/16/2018 11:37:00 PM
Laura, Laura..so realistic if had a child or a pet. Neurotic like us!!! Too too true. You always write in way I so enjoy, congrats! bbn
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Date: 3/1/2018 10:22:00 PM
Congrats, Laura, and I love the puppy. Viv x
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Date: 2/28/2018 5:55:00 PM
Nicely done Laura, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:28:00 PM
How cute this story is Laura...and even better that it is true! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:25:00 PM
Delightful and adorable story. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:23:00 PM
Entertaining, sweet story well-told, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 2/28/2018 10:03:00 AM
A great story! So cute :)
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:17:00 AM
But you love puppies! great poem made me smile..
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:22:00 AM
of course I do! It's just another tale of my crazy boy feeding off his back leg all darn day like it was a rawhide bone or something.
Date: 2/28/2018 4:57:00 AM
They are incredible...Had a few well...A nice experience you had with puppy...An entertaining poem indeed...All the best
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2018 8:21:00 AM
thank you Arturo :)-luloo

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