Odd Notions

I've these odd notions in my mind
oddball fancies like thread unwind
spooling strings of creative thought
stitch together the wacky lot

Loose ideas, patchwork pieces
smooth as silks (or fuzzy fleeces)
incoherent alone, single
yet together, mix and mingle
into quirky mosaic scene
so fresh and bright, and strangely keen

A crazy quilt of high ideals
imagination spins and reels
transporting me to places far
away from how things really are
and off to what might someday be
a better world, a better me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Buck Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Rhona: Well done. Wonderful word pictures of the power that lies within our imaginations especially when written down and shared. Thank you for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Mcferran Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Thank you so much! ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 7:52 PM
This poem is proof that you have a poet's mind!!
Mcferran Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 1:28 AM
Thank you, my friend! I've been thinking of using this as the title poem of my next book... Your comment has bolstered my confidence in the idea! ;)
Faulkner Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Do you do any kind of needlepoint? This made me think of that, but you are a wordsmith of the finest caliber!
Mcferran Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:05 PM
I used to years and years ago... but now I mainly write or do graphic art. Aaawww, thank you so much! That means a lot coming from a poetess of your caliber!! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 5:25 AM
I cannot imagine a better you, as I think you are "practically perfect in every way" my friend. This is darling; reminds me of my mother's sewing prowess in the form of a poetic masterpiece.
Mcferran Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Aaaww, you are too kind, my friend!! So glad you liked this! ;)
Bangalee Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 12:20 AM
beautiful poetic expression
Mcferran Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 10:04 PM
Thank you, Mahtab! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Ooh lush and flush with texture ~ a wonderful read! xomo
Mcferran Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 11:08 PM
Thank you so much, Mo!! ;)
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