Odd and Sleek

Shadorma Short, sleek, chic and sweet Swept me quick Off my feet Charmed me slowly beat by beat What an odd rare pick! February 28, 2022

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Date: 3/7/2022 6:09:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: delightful and delighting... God bless you.

Date: 3/6/2022 11:14:00 AM

I think it's so clever how you did this on the form's name, which sounds also like a person's name. Great job. Congrats on the win

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/6/2022 4:43:00 PM

That’s all I could come up with:) Thank you, M.

Date: 3/6/2022 9:46:00 AM

Margarita, this is so very creative with a tinge of tongue in cheek! Congratulations on your win.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/6/2022 4:43:00 PM

My first shadorma, thank you. M.

Date: 3/6/2022 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my contest ( Give me a Shadorma). Your submission is clever, Margarita. Blessings

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/6/2022 4:44:00 PM

Thank you for introducing me to it:) M.