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Ocular Shapes

Have i not intervened with the shape of the sea
Or vision vivid mountains with fish jumps
So pure the look like their soft skin
Forming shapes' never seen
Craving for more,

Ocular shapes surround us 
Yet without we're still living




August,11,2018

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Date: 8/15/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hello Talin, A very cleverly done Imagism poem. What you say about ocular shapes is indeed very true. Enjoyed your poem!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 8/15/2018 10:10:00 AM
Hhhh funny isn't it ...thankx

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