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Ocular Shapes

Have i not intervened with the shape of the sea Or vision vivid mountains with fish jumps So pure the look like their soft skin Forming shapes' never seen Craving for more, Ocular shapes surround us Yet without we're still living August,11,2018

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Date: 8/15/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hello Talin, A very cleverly done Imagism poem. What you say about ocular shapes is indeed very true. Enjoyed your poem!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 8/15/2018 10:10:00 AM
Hhhh funny isn't it ...thankx

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