Octobers Surrendering Sun

Colorful are the skies

 lost in their dyes,

Cold are the stones 

displaying their tones…

Captive their surrender 

of hearts in their tender,

Aromas in distribution 

solitudes of seclusion…

Nights in their mourning

 frosts are aborning,

Stranded in their storms

 as the weather conforms…

Autumn in its yawning,

for a new day is dawning.





Oct.23.2019
OCTOBER SUN
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
 
N/A for contest
Went over the Max lines of 12

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Hello There

October 30, 2019 at 8:05 PM

So, beautiful, and absolutely loved the musical accompaniment and video! Awesome, ^WW^ :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2019 at 11:03 AM

this is utterly gorgeous. One little thing, and I may be wrong, but I believe she limited lines , something like 6 - 12 lines. I know for me it's a winner. Recheck it. If you doubled the lines up, it would meet the limit.

Winged Warrior

October 30, 2019 at 5:04 PM

Thank you, my friend...but too late...for some reason I thought it was 14 lines...duh on my part...thanks anyway...^WW^ :o)

Brenda Chiri

October 25, 2019 at 11:02 PM

Oh wow bro bro Lol why don't I ever check to see if you had entered first before I attempt to write for a contest!;) lol reads like a winner bro bro!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 25, 2019 at 8:58 AM

- Lovely written about October, W.W. ... a month of lots of rain and cold storms here ... not beautiful at all - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

October 23, 2019 at 3:24 PM

Such a refreshing write, I wouldn't call it simple because it is not, but maybe it's a change of style that is refreshing, anyway I'm trying to say I really like it!