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Octobers Surrendering Sun

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Colorful are the skies lost in their dyes, Cold are the stones displaying their tones… Captive their surrender of hearts in their tender, Aromas in distribution solitudes of seclusion… Nights in their mourning frosts are aborning, Stranded in their storms as the weather conforms… Autumn in its yawning, for a new day is dawning. Oct.23.2019 OCTOBER SUN Sponsored by: Line Gauthier N/A for contest Went over the Max lines of 12

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Hello There

Date: 10/30/2019 8:05:00 PM

So, beautiful, and absolutely loved the musical accompaniment and video! Awesome, ^WW^ :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2019 11:03:00 AM

this is utterly gorgeous. One little thing, and I may be wrong, but I believe she limited lines , something like 6 - 12 lines. I know for me it's a winner. Recheck it. If you doubled the lines up, it would meet the limit.

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/30/2019 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, my friend...but too late...for some reason I thought it was 14 lines...duh on my part...thanks anyway...^WW^ :o)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/25/2019 11:02:00 PM

Oh wow bro bro Lol why don't I ever check to see if you had entered first before I attempt to write for a contest!;) lol reads like a winner bro bro!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/25/2019 8:58:00 AM

- Lovely written about October, W.W. ... a month of lots of rain and cold storms here ... not beautiful at all - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/23/2019 3:24:00 PM

Such a refreshing write, I wouldn't call it simple because it is not, but maybe it's a change of style that is refreshing, anyway I'm trying to say I really like it!

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/23/2019 1:31:00 PM

Very good...A MASTER PAINTER of WORDS...COME on in AUTUMN...We'll deal with Mrs. Cold Winter after...

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2019 11:45:00 AM

nice imagery...i do not like Autumn at all...

Chris Green

Date: 10/23/2019 11:25:00 AM

A beautiful morning inspiring and even more beautiful poem. This was really nice my friend. Top of the list I see coming.