October's Song

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Written on October 16, 2023

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Pumpkin spice and everything nice, October brings the heart autumn wings, This gentle peace is God’s masterpiece, Lifting the heartstrings with the love He brings, Silencing the evil stings with grace that truly sings!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:22:00 AM

Lovely rhyming in your inspirational poem, Gina. Congrats and thanks for your participation.66

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/17/2023 6:02:00 AM

An inspiring poem my friend. I do believe that in Heaven, every day will be October.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2023 2:40:00 PM

such beautiful imagery and your faith shines through in this lovely quintain:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/16/2023 2:12:00 PM

a truly soft and inspirational write, Gina. I love how you described October as the season of 'gentle peace .. God's masterpiece.' I feel grace in your inspirational lines. Well done, and am faving...enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/16/2023 10:04:00 AM

Let's sing to October, a great time of the year. Have a wonderful fall day.............

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/16/2023 9:07:00 AM

What a beautiful, uplifting poem dear Gina. Glorious for the autumn season. Great flow and rhyming. Love all the lines but especially,’ October brings the heart autumn wings.’ So gorgeous. Love this so much I just have to fave it. :) Hugs to you xx