Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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October Sun

October sun how it catches my eye
as it casts a gold glow each morning
It rises in the autumnal sky so high
I cherish each day the sun’s dawning

October sun how it catches my eye
it resembles an enormous pumpkin
Halloween revellers will soon pass by
wanting gifts from this country bumpkin

October sun how it catches my eye
As it scintillates in the bare trees
How quickly the seasons pass us by
soon will come winter’s harsh freeze

October Sun Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

N/A in Contest but awarded POTD 10/31/19

10/29/19

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Line Gauthier November 18, 2019 at 10:55 AM Jan, the perfect match of your photo to your poem elevates the set to absolutely breathtaking. I wish photos came through with contest entries because I can assure you would not have received an N/A. I'm so happy your beautiful poem was highlighted as a POTD. Jan Allison May 28, 2020 at 1:11 PM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos November 10, 2019 at 12:42 PM Congratulations Jan on this lovely poem been chosen as POTD - a wonderful honor. I took some time off soup just after I got POTD due to our long awaited move and settling into our new home. I thoroughly enjoyed your write, Hugs and blessings. Jennifer. Jan Allison May 28, 2020 at 1:10 PM Thanks Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Sarban Bhattacharya November 9, 2019 at 4:42 AM Well written ! Jan Allison May 28, 2020 at 1:10 PM thanks Sarban:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger November 2, 2019 at 2:36 PM Congratulations on POTD. Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 1:23 PM Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf November 1, 2019 at 11:05 AM Yet another congratulations on this one, Jan. This time, for POTD. November's here now; but thanks to your poem, October will be long remembered, not forgotten! Cheers, Gershon Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 1:22 PM Thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 7:02 AM Just wonderful Jan. Congratulations on POTD with this gem. Hugs // Charlie xx Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 1:22 PM Thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams October 31, 2019 at 7:11 PM A wonderful October poem...congratulations on your POTD, very deserving :) hugs Jan Allison November 3, 2019 at 1:20 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball October 31, 2019 at 5:54 PM Congrats on a well deserved POTD Jan. Ah sweet October. The last vestiges of Summer past. Nice job my friend. God Bless. JB Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 6:11 PM It is blustery and cold but its so lovely to see the falling leaves I do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Gordon Mcconnell October 31, 2019 at 4:43 PM Congrats Jan on the POTD, did you get out that thermal vest!! Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 6:10 PM Yes I did lol - wore it to work at school on weds, was warm in the exam room when I went in so went to the loo and took it off - then sat and froze for 3 hours when the sun went in It was so cold in the room - am working tomorrow, my vest is primed and ready for action lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee October 31, 2019 at 3:49 PM Congratulations Jan on your POTD! Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 6:09 PM thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Milgate October 31, 2019 at 3:25 PM lovely. Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 3:34 PM Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan x

Tania Kitchin October 31, 2019 at 12:02 PM Congratulations Jan on POTD with your beautifully penned poem! :) Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:10 PM Thanks Tania, love the new avatar it's almost as pretty as you:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands October 31, 2019 at 10:53 AM Congratulations for POTD Jan :) Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:09 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh October 31, 2019 at 9:42 AM Good job on getting POTD, great work! Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:08 PM I am so surprised Connor! :-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2019 at 9:41 AM October imagery in this Jack-o-Lantern poem is spot-on, Jan. Cool autumnal write. Kudos on POTD. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever. Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:06 PM Thanks so much Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France October 31, 2019 at 9:41 AM Jan, BEAUTIFUL and a big congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor ! Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:08 PM Thanks so much for the congratulations and the soup mail Constance :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 9:10 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:05 PM I'm stunned and delighted anne-lise :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May October 31, 2019 at 8:59 AM Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:04 PM Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 31, 2019 at 8:22 AM Excellent write Jan! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs!!! xomo :), Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:01 PM Thanks mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior October 31, 2019 at 8:15 AM Back with a worthy Congrats!! on POTD!! Jan...enjoy the honors me lady lol...^WW^ :o) Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 2:00 PM I'm stunned i got potd as I got n.a. in the contest hugs Jan xxx

Ts Poetry October 31, 2019 at 8:06 AM Back with congratulations Jan Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 1:59 PM Thanks so much ts:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper October 31, 2019 at 7:34 AM Perfect write, Jan, congratulations on POTD Hugs and Happy Halloween Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 1:58 PM Thanks eve I'm delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green October 31, 2019 at 7:03 AM Big congrats on your POTD honor my friend. Your beautiful poem deserves to be here. Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 1:55 PM Thanks Chris I got n.a. now potd... go figure that one out :-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:26 AM Delightful scenery in visions of October..a splendid write Jan. Much enjoyed the pleasant read..Congratulations on poem of the day. Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 1:54 PM Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael October 31, 2019 at 5:41 AM Congratulations Jan on POTD... The October Sun...Summer's after glow Jan Allison October 31, 2019 at 1:54 PM Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

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