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October sun how it catches my eye as it casts a gold glow each morning It rises in the autumnal sky so high I cherish each day the sun’s dawning October sun how it catches my eye it resembles an enormous pumpkin Halloween revellers will soon pass by wanting gifts from this country bumpkin October sun how it catches my eye As it scintillates in the bare trees How quickly the seasons pass us by soon will come winter’s harsh freeze October Sun Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier N/A in Contest but awarded POTD 10/31/19 10/29/19

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Date: 11/18/2019 10:55:00 AM
Jan, the perfect match of your photo to your poem elevates the set to absolutely breathtaking. I wish photos came through with contest entries because I can assure you would not have received an N/A. I'm so happy your beautiful poem was highlighted as a POTD.
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Date: 11/10/2019 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on this lovely poem been chosen as POTD - a wonderful honor. I took some time off soup just after I got POTD due to our long awaited move and settling into our new home. I thoroughly enjoyed your write, Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 11/9/2019 4:42:00 AM
Well written !
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/1/2019 11:05:00 AM
Yet another congratulations on this one, Jan. This time, for POTD. November's here now; but thanks to your poem, October will be long remembered, not forgotten! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/1/2019 7:02:00 AM
Just wonderful Jan. Congratulations on POTD with this gem. Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/1/2019 4:20:00 AM
My congratulations, Anne Lise for your deserved POTD. Hugs.
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Victor I think your comment jumped from my poem and its meant for Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 11:02:00 PM
I love the repeating lines in this, it creates the mood perfectly. As the Sun warms everything still, the cold Wind certainly brings a bitter chill. Bundle up and keep warm my friend. Congratulations Jan, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Brandy I do appreciate your comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 7:11:00 PM
A wonderful October poem...congratulations on your POTD, very deserving :) hugs
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 5:54:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved POTD Jan. Ah sweet October. The last vestiges of Summer past. Nice job my friend. God Bless. JB
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:11:00 PM
It is blustery and cold but its so lovely to see the falling leaves I do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 4:43:00 PM
Congrats Jan on the POTD, did you get out that thermal vest!!
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:10:00 PM
Yes I did lol - wore it to work at school on weds, was warm in the exam room when I went in so went to the loo and took it off - then sat and froze for 3 hours when the sun went in It was so cold in the room - am working tomorrow, my vest is primed and ready for action lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on your POTD!
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:09:00 PM
thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 3:35:00 PM
A beautifful poem Jan . . . I also love trees when they're bare of leaves, when you see them silhouetted at twilight, what a wonderful sight. So deserving of POTD, congratulations. ~ Beryl
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:09:00 PM
thanks Beryl, I love this time of year!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 3:25:00 PM
lovely.
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Date: 10/31/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 10/31/2019 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on POTD with your beautifully penned poem! :)
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Tania, love the new avatar it's almost as pretty as you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Jan :)
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 9:42:00 AM
Good job on getting POTD, great work!
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:08:00 PM
I am so surprised Connor! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 9:41:00 AM
Jan, BEAUTIFUL and a big congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor !
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for the congratulations and the soup mail Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 9:41:00 AM
October imagery in this Jack-o-Lantern poem is spot-on, Jan. Cool autumnal write. Kudos on POTD. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 9:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:05:00 PM
I'm stunned and delighted anne-lise :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 8:59:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 8:22:00 AM
Excellent write Jan! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs!!! xomo :),
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Date: 10/31/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thanks mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 8:15:00 AM
Back with a worthy Congrats!! on POTD!! Jan...enjoy the honors me lady lol...^WW^ :o)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/31/2019 2:00:00 PM
I'm stunned i got potd as I got n.a. in the contest hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/31/2019 8:06:00 AM
Back with congratulations Jan
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Date: 10/31/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thanks so much ts:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 7:34:00 AM
Perfect write, Jan, congratulations on POTD Hugs and Happy Halloween
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Date: 10/31/2019 1:58:00 PM
Thanks eve I'm delighted:-) hugs Jan xx
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