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October sun how it catches my eye as it casts a gold glow each morning It rises in the autumnal sky so high I cherish each day the sun’s dawning October sun how it catches my eye it resembles an enormous pumpkin Halloween revellers will soon pass by wanting gifts from this country bumpkin October sun how it catches my eye As it scintillates in the bare trees How quickly the seasons pass us by soon will come winter’s harsh freeze October Sun Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier N/A in Contest but awarded POTD 10/31/19 10/29/19

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2019 10:55:00 AM

Jan, the perfect match of your photo to your poem elevates the set to absolutely breathtaking. I wish photos came through with contest entries because I can assure you would not have received an N/A. I'm so happy your beautiful poem was highlighted as a POTD.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2020 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2019 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations Jan on this lovely poem been chosen as POTD - a wonderful honor. I took some time off soup just after I got POTD due to our long awaited move and settling into our new home. I thoroughly enjoyed your write, Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2020 1:10:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 11/9/2019 4:42:00 AM

Well written !

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2020 1:10:00 PM

thanks Sarban:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2019 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 1:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/1/2019 11:05:00 AM

Yet another congratulations on this one, Jan. This time, for POTD. November's here now; but thanks to your poem, October will be long remembered, not forgotten! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thanks so much GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 7:02:00 AM

Just wonderful Jan. Congratulations on POTD with this gem. Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/31/2019 7:11:00 PM

A wonderful October poem...congratulations on your POTD, very deserving :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 10/31/2019 5:54:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved POTD Jan. Ah sweet October. The last vestiges of Summer past. Nice job my friend. God Bless. JB

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 6:11:00 PM

It is blustery and cold but its so lovely to see the falling leaves I do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/31/2019 4:43:00 PM

Congrats Jan on the POTD, did you get out that thermal vest!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 6:10:00 PM

Yes I did lol - wore it to work at school on weds, was warm in the exam room when I went in so went to the loo and took it off - then sat and froze for 3 hours when the sun went in It was so cold in the room - am working tomorrow, my vest is primed and ready for action lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/31/2019 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations Jan on your POTD!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 6:09:00 PM

thanks Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Milgate

Date: 10/31/2019 3:25:00 PM

lovely.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan x

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/31/2019 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Jan on POTD with your beautifully penned poem! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:10:00 PM

Thanks Tania, love the new avatar it's almost as pretty as you:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/31/2019 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

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Date: 10/31/2019 9:42:00 AM

Good job on getting POTD, great work!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:08:00 PM

I am so surprised Connor! :-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/31/2019 9:41:00 AM

Jan, BEAUTIFUL and a big congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor !

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:08:00 PM

Thanks so much for the congratulations and the soup mail Constance :-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2019 9:41:00 AM

October imagery in this Jack-o-Lantern poem is spot-on, Jan. Cool autumnal write. Kudos on POTD. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 9:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:05:00 PM

I'm stunned and delighted anne-lise :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/31/2019 8:59:00 AM

Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/31/2019 8:22:00 AM

Excellent write Jan! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs!!! xomo :),

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:01:00 PM

Thanks mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/31/2019 8:15:00 AM

Back with a worthy Congrats!! on POTD!! Jan...enjoy the honors me lady lol...^WW^ :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 2:00:00 PM

I'm stunned i got potd as I got n.a. in the contest hugs Jan xxx

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/31/2019 8:06:00 AM

Back with congratulations Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 1:59:00 PM

Thanks so much ts:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2019 7:34:00 AM

Perfect write, Jan, congratulations on POTD Hugs and Happy Halloween

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 1:58:00 PM

Thanks eve I'm delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2019 7:03:00 AM

Big congrats on your POTD honor my friend. Your beautiful poem deserves to be here.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Chris I got n.a. now potd... go figure that one out :-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/31/2019 6:26:00 AM

Delightful scenery in visions of October..a splendid write Jan. Much enjoyed the pleasant read..Congratulations on poem of the day.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/31/2019 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations Jan on POTD... The October Sun...Summer's after glow

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx