October Sun

You, a dance of golden light upon my step of day 
hath sprung me to your happiness   
                              OCTOBER SUN ;
beneath a facsimile of crisp, you are  the ray  
that lights me up and takes my breath away  
                              OCTOBER SUN; 
whence forth this steadfast golden orb  is bless  
inside of me you fill, my every guess    
                                 you are, 
OCTOBER SUN; 
cold, bright, crisp, falling on colored leaves,  
thou glows strongest way up on the eaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/30/2019 1:53:00 PM
Lovely imagery... But I bet it's cold in October over there.
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Date: 10/29/2019 7:20:00 AM
Love this. October is my birth month and I have always enjoyed the crisp colorful month of October. Wonderful description and imagery here. Great write. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/29/2019 6:58:00 AM
Beautifully written :)
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Date: 10/28/2019 6:21:00 PM
This bot fun and poetic Panagiota
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Date: 10/28/2019 4:03:00 PM
Enjoyed the hues of the golden light ..dancing in your words..lovely flow and rhythm, Pixie.
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Date: 10/28/2019 4:00:00 PM
what a sweet poem Pixie I love the impact of the repeated phrase too:-) hugs Jan xx
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