Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

October Sun

Ascending above sanctum of horizon, a dawn inflames the effulgent rays,
Enlightening daybreak as embers of light set the scarlet morning ablaze
Projecting golden beams on hushed venues, in beatific style, not seen in a while,
Glittering on grass in vivid dewdrops, glinting ornamental autumnal smile.

Riding the path of shortened days, marigold passions eloquently evoke
Enchanting colors of resplendent meadows--sensuous vibes tenderly stoke
When traversing upon a vibrant blue-arc, solar-noon invokes seasons warm
Where cumulus clouds stroll the meridian, amid nary a sign of rainy storm.

Seeking affinity of ruby dusk, a spectrum inscribes on gilded evening skies
Iridescent emotions in colors of romance, pleasing desires of amorous eyes
As falling leaves waltz, in leisurely dance, attuned to song of sunset breeze
Descending slowly with vanishing sun, in forlorn shudders of barren trees.

October 28, 2019
Poem of the day on October 30, 2019
Placed 3rd: Strand special 2 by Brian Strand

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Duke Beaufort March 7, 2024 at 2:26 PM Vijay, I took a moment to go back a couple of years or so. Amazing that poetry can transport me to a different time of the year. This is very pleasant to read and reflects your generous and kind view of the world.

Quoth Theraven December 12, 2021 at 10:54 AM Vijay, Mystic Rose' calm voice pouring over your poem's words. Like the gentlest rain to wash over a soul on a Sunday. 'falling leaves waltz, in leisurely dance, attuned to song of sunset breeze' Very nice, this October Sun. Glad it decided not to pass me by. -Richard

Angela Crabtree November 12, 2020 at 7:46 PM I can visualize your words here, Vijay. Wonderfully written :)

Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2019 at 2:47 PM Congrats AGAIN, Vijay. This one does very well for you and now in Brian's contest!

Robertina B. November 20, 2019 at 12:17 AM An absolute exquisite work of extraordinary art, Vijay.. A belated congratulations on your POTD! Your talent shines, my friend.. Imagery is amazing! I now have such an appreciation of colors.. A fav for me..

Line Gauthier November 18, 2019 at 10:56 AM Congrats on your POTD, Vijay. Well penned.

Besma Riabi Dziri November 16, 2019 at 12:00 PM You amaze as always with your masterful poetic pen and feel, dear Vijay! An "October Sun" honour in October, and I congratulate you in November! Congratulations on your POTD honour! A true beauty deserving the recognition of your fellow poets and friends.. Warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2019 at 5:41 PM I see you got POTD for this gem. Congratulations, Vijay!

Jennifer Proxenos November 5, 2019 at 1:15 PM Wow, this is a gem Vijay, this write screams talent, creativity and a vivid imagination - I simply love it and had to fav. it. We are in our new home, and back on soup after my 2 week absence - a hectic, emotional move - I discovered more of my Grandfather's poems in one of my mothers cupboards, - I was ecstatic! Hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 2:22 PM Congratulations for making the transition! Enjoy your new home, Jennifer. And treasure the poems you found!! Much appreciate the kind thoughts...many thanks. Special thanks for the FAVE.

Judy Ball November 5, 2019 at 6:45 AM Beautifully described my friend. Autumn is indeed a most colorful month. It always ends the year in a blaze of glorious color. Nice job. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit November 8, 2019 at 2:22 PM Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2019 at 7:33 AM So artfully done dearest, Vijay! Brings to life everything! Congratulations on your POTD! Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 3:51 PM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose November 1, 2019 at 6:32 PM Congratulations on your POTD, it was a beautiful poem from the very start, That is why I chose to read it aloud. Loved it . Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 3:51 PM Thank you my friend--much obliged.

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:57 AM Such an awesome write Vijay. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Charlie Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 3:50 PM Much appreciate Charles--many many thanks.

CayCay Godwin October 31, 2019 at 4:30 PM I think I just fell in love with colors all over again; outstanding imagery and a moving poem that is sprinkled with lovely adoring light; or maybe that's just how it made my insides feel. I see it made POTD - congrats on that. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 3:50 PM Thank you CayCay--much appreciate.

Lawrence Sharp October 31, 2019 at 12:25 AM Back with congrats on POTD, Vijay, well deserved, my friend. Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:36 AM Much appreciate the return visit..many thanks my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong October 30, 2019 at 8:59 PM I commented on this wonderful poem yesterday Vijay but it disappeared. Again, congratulations on a well deserved POTD! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:36 AM Much appreciate the return visit, Connie--many thanks for the kind remarks.

Silent One October 30, 2019 at 5:33 PM A poem that fully deserves POTD.. Congrats Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:35 AM Thank you Silent One--much appreciate.

Indiana Shaw October 30, 2019 at 5:00 PM Such a elegantly worded poem - how blind we are to what would be just another October sun day, you provoked such imagery otherwise missed, enjoyed Indie . . . : ) Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:35 AM That is so very kind--much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Hello There October 30, 2019 at 2:19 PM Back again, my friend, for a congrats on this well-received poem of the day honor! Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:24 PM Glad to see you back, HT..thank you for the return visit..much appreciate, as always.

Kurt Ravidas October 30, 2019 at 1:37 PM A visual and scenic quill of the poet who loves wide poetic horizons) Congrats on POTD, Vijay. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:22 PM Much appreciate Kurt--many thanks for the visit and kind remarks.

Joseph May October 30, 2019 at 12:47 PM Congrats on POTD Vijay Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:21 PM Many thanks Joseph...much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2019 at 12:42 PM So descriptive, Vijay. YOu are masterful with imagery. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:21 PM Thank you Andrea--glad you liked the imagery--much appreciate the kind remarks.

Paula Goldsmith October 30, 2019 at 12:03 PM congratulations on your POTD. A beautiful fall poem........... Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:20 PM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole October 30, 2019 at 10:55 AM The Sun caressing an October day, will always be my favorite- especially on the first. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day!! :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thank you for the return visit, Brandy--much appreciate the kind remarks.

Sunlite Wanter October 30, 2019 at 10:40 AM Vivid vocabulary musical reading. Congratulations! I couldn't get the music, though I went to your home page. Something wrong with my goofy computer, I guess. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 3:18 PM The only music there is music of Pixie's voice..some have said they can't hear..but it is all there. Thank you my friend..appreciate the kind remarks.

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