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October Sun

Ascending above sanctum of horizon, a dawn inflames the effulgent rays, Enlightening daybreak as embers of light set the scarlet morning ablaze Projecting golden beams on hushed venues, in beatific style, not seen in a while, Glittering on grass in vivid dewdrops, glinting ornamental autumnal smile. Riding the path of shortened days, marigold passions eloquently evoke Enchanting colors of resplendent meadows--sensuous vibes tenderly stoke When traversing upon a vibrant blue-arc, solar-noon invokes seasons warm Where cumulus clouds stroll the meridian, amid nary a sign of rainy storm. Seeking affinity of ruby dusk, a spectrum inscribes on gilded evening skies Iridescent emotions in colors of romance, pleasing desires of amorous eyes As falling leaves waltz, in leisurely dance, attuned to song of sunset breeze Descending slowly with vanishing sun, in forlorn shudders of barren trees. October 28, 2019 Poem of the day on October 30, 2019 Placed 3rd: Strand special 2 by Brian Strand

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Date: 3/7/2024 2:26:00 PM
Vijay, I took a moment to go back a couple of years or so. Amazing that poetry can transport me to a different time of the year. This is very pleasant to read and reflects your generous and kind view of the world.
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Date: 12/12/2021 10:54:00 AM
Vijay, Mystic Rose' calm voice pouring over your poem's words. Like the gentlest rain to wash over a soul on a Sunday. 'falling leaves waltz, in leisurely dance, attuned to song of sunset breeze' Very nice, this October Sun. Glad it decided not to pass me by. -Richard
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Date: 11/12/2020 7:46:00 PM
I can visualize your words here, Vijay. Wonderfully written :)
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:47:00 PM
Congrats AGAIN, Vijay. This one does very well for you and now in Brian's contest!
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Date: 11/20/2019 12:17:00 AM
An absolute exquisite work of extraordinary art, Vijay.. A belated congratulations on your POTD! Your talent shines, my friend.. Imagery is amazing! I now have such an appreciation of colors.. A fav for me..
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Date: 11/18/2019 10:56:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Vijay. Well penned.
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Date: 11/16/2019 12:00:00 PM
You amaze as always with your masterful poetic pen and feel, dear Vijay! An "October Sun" honour in October, and I congratulate you in November! Congratulations on your POTD honour! A true beauty deserving the recognition of your fellow poets and friends.. Warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.
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Date: 11/11/2019 5:41:00 PM
I see you got POTD for this gem. Congratulations, Vijay!
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Date: 11/5/2019 1:15:00 PM
Wow, this is a gem Vijay, this write screams talent, creativity and a vivid imagination - I simply love it and had to fav. it. We are in our new home, and back on soup after my 2 week absence - a hectic, emotional move - I discovered more of my Grandfather's poems in one of my mothers cupboards, - I was ecstatic! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/8/2019 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations for making the transition! Enjoy your new home, Jennifer. And treasure the poems you found!! Much appreciate the kind thoughts...many thanks. Special thanks for the FAVE.
Date: 11/5/2019 6:45:00 AM
Beautifully described my friend. Autumn is indeed a most colorful month. It always ends the year in a blaze of glorious color. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/8/2019 2:22:00 PM
Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.
Date: 11/3/2019 7:33:00 AM
So artfully done dearest, Vijay! Brings to life everything! Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 11/4/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 11/1/2019 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, it was a beautiful poem from the very start, That is why I chose to read it aloud. Loved it .
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Date: 11/4/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much obliged.
Date: 11/1/2019 6:57:00 AM
Such an awesome write Vijay. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Charlie
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Date: 11/4/2019 3:50:00 PM
Much appreciate Charles--many many thanks.
Date: 10/31/2019 4:30:00 PM
I think I just fell in love with colors all over again; outstanding imagery and a moving poem that is sprinkled with lovely adoring light; or maybe that's just how it made my insides feel. I see it made POTD - congrats on that. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 11/4/2019 3:50:00 PM
Thank you CayCay--much appreciate.
Date: 10/31/2019 12:25:00 AM
Back with congrats on POTD, Vijay, well deserved, my friend.
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:36:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit..many thanks my friend.
Date: 10/30/2019 8:59:00 PM
I commented on this wonderful poem yesterday Vijay but it disappeared. Again, congratulations on a well deserved POTD! : ) xxoo
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:36:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit, Connie--many thanks for the kind remarks.
Date: 10/30/2019 5:33:00 PM
A poem that fully deserves POTD.. Congrats
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Silent One--much appreciate.
Date: 10/30/2019 5:00:00 PM
Such a elegantly worded poem - how blind we are to what would be just another October sun day, you provoked such imagery otherwise missed, enjoyed Indie . . . : )
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:35:00 AM
That is so very kind--much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.
Date: 10/30/2019 2:19:00 PM
Back again, my friend, for a congrats on this well-received poem of the day honor!
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:24:00 PM
Glad to see you back, HT..thank you for the return visit..much appreciate, as always.
Date: 10/30/2019 1:37:00 PM
A visual and scenic quill of the poet who loves wide poetic horizons) Congrats on POTD, Vijay.
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:22:00 PM
Much appreciate Kurt--many thanks for the visit and kind remarks.
Date: 10/30/2019 12:47:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Vijay
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:21:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph...much appreciate.
Date: 10/30/2019 12:42:00 PM
So descriptive, Vijay. YOu are masterful with imagery.
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--glad you liked the imagery--much appreciate the kind remarks.
Date: 10/30/2019 12:03:00 PM
congratulations on your POTD. A beautiful fall poem...........
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Date: 10/30/2019 10:55:00 AM
The Sun caressing an October day, will always be my favorite- especially on the first. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day!! :) Brandy
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you for the return visit, Brandy--much appreciate the kind remarks.
Date: 10/30/2019 10:40:00 AM
Vivid vocabulary musical reading. Congratulations! I couldn't get the music, though I went to your home page. Something wrong with my goofy computer, I guess.
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:18:00 PM
The only music there is music of Pixie's voice..some have said they can't hear..but it is all there. Thank you my friend..appreciate the kind remarks.
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