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October Stirs

Perfumed earth abounds in the stir of autumn While muted golden tones crackle with aging Twisted, shedding branches coalesce in the touted mist Mired in feathered, falling ocher leaves drift trailing While muted golden tones crackle with aging This cornucopia harvest bursts with robust fondness Mired in feathered, falling ocher leaves drift trailing Enriching our October path as a gift of abundance This cornucopia harvest bursts with robust fondness Twisted, shedding branches coalesce in the touted mist Enriching our October path as a gift of abundance Perfumed earth abounds in the stir of autumn October 2, 2019 Poets October Pantoum Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula

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Date: 2/6/2020 12:59:00 PM
I have not been on for a while, but Congratulations on your win Lonna. It's a great pantoum! Blessings, Susan Maree
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/6/2020 1:55:00 PM
Welcome back and thank you for your kind comment! Lonna
Date: 11/7/2019 8:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Poet's October Pantoum, Lonna. Hugs Eve
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/7/2019 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your comments. It always is appreciated. Lonna
Date: 11/7/2019 4:44:00 PM
congrats on your win dear Lonna
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/7/2019 8:23:00 PM
Pixie, thank you again for your kind comments. Lonna
Date: 11/7/2019 12:14:00 PM
Wonderfully written and much enjoyed pantoum worthy for first its high placement, thank you for entering my contest ~ Aloha always William
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/7/2019 8:21:00 PM
Thank you again Master William! Aloha back at you Lonna

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