Lonna Blodgett Poet Pantoum

October Stirs

Perfumed earth abounds in the stir of autumn
While muted golden tones crackle with aging
Twisted, shedding branches coalesce in the touted mist
Mired in feathered, falling ocher leaves drift trailing

While muted golden tones crackle with aging
This cornucopia harvest bursts with robust fondness
Mired in feathered, falling ocher leaves drift trailing
Enriching our October path as a gift of abundance

This cornucopia harvest bursts with robust fondness
Twisted, shedding branches coalesce in the touted mist
Enriching our October path as a gift of abundance
Perfumed earth abounds in the stir of autumn


October 2, 2019
Poets October Pantoum Contest
Sponsored by William Kekaula

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Susan Jeavons February 6, 2020 at 12:59 PM I have not been on for a while, but Congratulations on your win Lonna. It's a great pantoum! Blessings, Susan Maree Lonna Blodgett February 6, 2020 at 1:55 PM Welcome back and thank you for your kind comment! Lonna

Eve Roper November 7, 2019 at 8:09 PM Congratulations on your win in Poet's October Pantoum, Lonna. Hugs Eve Lonna Blodgett November 7, 2019 at 8:22 PM Thank you Eve for your comments. It always is appreciated. Lonna

Mystic Rose Rose November 7, 2019 at 4:44 PM congrats on your win dear Lonna Lonna Blodgett November 7, 2019 at 8:23 PM Pixie, thank you again for your kind comments. Lonna

William Kelii Kekaula November 7, 2019 at 12:14 PM Wonderfully written and much enjoyed pantoum worthy for first its high placement, thank you for entering my contest ~ Aloha always William Lonna Blodgett November 7, 2019 at 8:21 PM Thank you again Master William! Aloha back at you Lonna