Michael Tor Poet Haiku

October Sky

OCTOBER SKY 


                             strawberry hues begging for attention
                                 coloring vibrant images skyward 
                                    accentuating visual fruition

                                         harvest moon light
                                        illuminating the heart
                                       embracing one another

                                           passion swelling
                                        the heavens blushing
                                          satisfying release
                                                 
                                                  
                                           

                                                  
                                       
   8/25/2015 Michael Tor Any poem that received honorable mention.
   Sponsored by Broken Wings.

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Benjamin Bartley April 1, 2025 at 12:43 PM Nice autumnal poem. It sure was fun to see your poem displayed here just after reading your nice comment. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick November 18, 2024 at 1:03 PM I enjoyed reading this descriptive one that was a winner at some point in time. Thanks for sharing it with us. I like that about strawberry colored sky. Sara K Michael Tor November 18, 2024 at 1:19 PM Thank you Sara for your feedback. I am glad you enjoyed. God bless you...

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:51 PM these are gorgeous. you are good with these!! Michael Tor March 14, 2016 at 2:07 PM Thank you Andrea gracias Senora.

Edlynn Nau November 8, 2015 at 1:59 PM LOVE THIS! Interesting metaphor, delightful balance of Syllable count, verb, adverb and very picturesque snap shots. Do more Haiku Mike since you are good with so few words! Not an easy task.

Skat A September 1, 2015 at 11:58 PM thank you for the entry.... SKAT Michael Tor September 10, 2015 at 12:44 AM Your welcome Skat Michael Tor September 2, 2015 at 4:44 AM Your welcome Skat. I thank you appreciate your acknowledgement.

Aiyah Torres September 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM Congratulations michael!! :) It was a wonderful write!! ^_^ Michael Tor September 1, 2015 at 9:49 PM Thank you Alyah Love your poetry. I really feel after reading some of the placing poems that yours should have been at the very top. If I was the judge you have been at the very top, and other poets, but that is my opinion.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 5:10 AM Wonderful string of haikus Michael! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win! Michael Tor August 31, 2015 at 5:56 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma. I appreciate your evaluation.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 27, 2015 at 1:39 PM Impressively written my friend, Michael. Michael Tor August 27, 2015 at 5:28 PM Thank you Demetrios coming from you it means so much.

Constance La France August 26, 2015 at 5:37 PM Thanks for visiting my poem. Your write is quite beautiful ~~ Michael Tor August 26, 2015 at 8:36 PM Thank you Broken Wings, I'm looking forward to reading more of yours.