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October Sky

OCTOBER SKY 


                             strawberry hues begging for attention
                                 coloring vibrant images skyward 
                                    accentuating visual fruition

                                         harvest moon light
                                        illuminating the heart
                                       embracing one another

                                           passion swelling
                                        the heavens blushing
                                          satisfying release
                                                 
                                                  
                                           

                                                  
                                       
   8/25/2015 Michael Tor Any poem that received honorable mention.
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Benjamin Bartley Date: 4/1/2025 12:43:00 PM Nice autumnal poem. It sure was fun to see your poem displayed here just after reading your nice comment. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/18/2024 1:03:00 PM I enjoyed reading this descriptive one that was a winner at some point in time. Thanks for sharing it with us. I like that about strawberry colored sky. Sara K Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 11/18/2024 1:19:00 PM Thank you Sara for your feedback. I am glad you enjoyed. God bless you...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2016 7:51:00 PM these are gorgeous. you are good with these!! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 3/14/2016 2:07:00 PM Thank you Andrea gracias Senora.

Edlynn Nau Date: 11/8/2015 1:59:00 PM LOVE THIS! Interesting metaphor, delightful balance of Syllable count, verb, adverb and very picturesque snap shots. Do more Haiku Mike since you are good with so few words! Not an easy task. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/1/2015 11:58:00 PM thank you for the entry.... SKAT Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/10/2015 12:44:00 AM Your welcome Skat Michael Tor Date: 9/2/2015 4:44:00 AM Your welcome Skat. I thank you appreciate your acknowledgement.

Aiyah Torres Date: 9/1/2015 11:39:00 AM Congratulations michael!! :) It was a wonderful write!! ^_^ Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/1/2015 9:49:00 PM Thank you Alyah Love your poetry. I really feel after reading some of the placing poems that yours should have been at the very top. If I was the judge you have been at the very top, and other poets, but that is my opinion.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/31/2015 5:10:00 AM Wonderful string of haikus Michael! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 8/31/2015 5:56:00 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma. I appreciate your evaluation.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/27/2015 1:39:00 PM Impressively written my friend, Michael. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 8/27/2015 5:28:00 PM Thank you Demetrios coming from you it means so much.

Constance La France Date: 8/26/2015 5:37:00 PM Thanks for visiting my poem. Your write is quite beautiful ~~ Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 8/26/2015 8:36:00 PM Thank you Broken Wings, I'm looking forward to reading more of yours.