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October Sky

OCTOBER SKY strawberry hues begging for attention coloring vibrant images skyward accentuating visual fruition harvest moon light illuminating the heart embracing one another passion swelling the heavens blushing satisfying release 8/25/2015 Michael Tor Any poem that received honorable mention. Sponsored by Broken Wings.

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Benjamin Bartley

Date: 4/1/2025 12:43:00 PM

Nice autumnal poem. It sure was fun to see your poem displayed here just after reading your nice comment. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2024 1:03:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this descriptive one that was a winner at some point in time. Thanks for sharing it with us. I like that about strawberry colored sky. Sara K

Michael Tor
Date: 11/18/2024 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Sara for your feedback. I am glad you enjoyed. God bless you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:51:00 PM

these are gorgeous. you are good with these!!

Michael Tor
Date: 3/14/2016 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Andrea gracias Senora.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/8/2015 1:59:00 PM

LOVE THIS! Interesting metaphor, delightful balance of Syllable count, verb, adverb and very picturesque snap shots. Do more Haiku Mike since you are good with so few words! Not an easy task.

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2015 11:58:00 PM

thank you for the entry.... SKAT

Michael Tor
Date: 9/10/2015 12:44:00 AM

Your welcome Skat

Michael Tor
Date: 9/2/2015 4:44:00 AM

Your welcome Skat. I thank you appreciate your acknowledgement.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/1/2015 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations michael!! :) It was a wonderful write!! ^_^

Michael Tor
Date: 9/1/2015 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Alyah Love your poetry. I really feel after reading some of the placing poems that yours should have been at the very top. If I was the judge you have been at the very top, and other poets, but that is my opinion.