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October Sky - Three Haiku

October Sky – three haiku #1 lightning strobes hearts thunder uncoiling whips crack eye stinging terror #2 frosted exodus wingtips warming on the fly suns iced crystal glare #3 cold hoar frost rainbow saddened cornucopia tears of failing sun John G. Lawless 8/19/2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2015 7:31:00 AM

Very creative works for a contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the congratutory visit to my page..Sara

John Lawless
Date: 8/23/2015 7:40:00 AM

Always good to hear from you Sara, thanks for stopping to read and comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 7:10:00 PM

very descriptive writing, John. Her contests are sure inspiring!

John Lawless
Date: 8/23/2015 7:39:00 AM

Yup, October runs the gamut from harvest to hoar frost. Thanks for stopping by Andrea.

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/19/2015 1:55:00 PM

Dear John, beautiful haiku....like three gems:-)7!!...love, Anu:-)

John Lawless
Date: 8/23/2015 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for visiting and commenting Anulaxmi, appreciate the high mark. I view Haiku as individual, three line, poetic writes that should stand alone so I separated them to emphasize their individuality.