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October Shivers

october hurls its winds
in cold unnatural
spooky ways
its clouds screeching
sounding scary silences
midst an eerie
twisted all too déja vu 
twilight zone
halloween spinster



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~RANDOM MUSINGS VOL.1~ 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rose  Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:19 PM
The chills are here, I hope they don't stay, I am already longing for spring, and its just begun Line,
Gauthier Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:46 AM
O my goodness, we're in for a long winter ~ lol
Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Wonderful with the right amount of spooky. Not too much, just right.
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Thanks, Caren ~
Logan Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Good title for such an eerie October poem.
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Thank you, Jenna. Much appreciated ~
Mcintosh Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:45 AM
Spooky :) Happy Fall ... God bless you
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:08 AM
LOL thanks, Regina ~
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