October - Remembered

Written: September 15, 2026, for week's Poetry Challenge: Autumn Memory The leaves came loose like letters from the trees, and skittered silver-gold along the lane; the wind went whispering through russet peas, then curled its cool refrain around the rain. I still recall the harvest's amber light, the scent of apples crushed beneath our feet; your laughter lingered, low, against the night, while woodsmoke made the dark seem warm and sweet. The pumpkins burned like lanterns by the door, and dusk drew lilac veils across the field; we spoke of things we had not voiced before, as if the year itself had paused to yield. Now autumn comes, and all the old winds start— the leaves fall, but they cannot take your heart.
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September 16, 2026 at 5:36 AM
Oh this is incredibly gorgeous and heart-touching, dear Sotto! Such tender imagery you've painted from your autumnal palette, with descriptions that really make my soul quiver! And sigh! "The leaves came loose like letters from the trees, and skittered silver-gold along the lane;" oh the alliteration flows so mesmerizingly throughout! With a deep sense of nostalgia, stillness and insight.. very true.. the leaves may fall, but they cannot fade out hearts, for it lives in the hope of renewal.. Loved reading this! 🍁🍂💫🌙
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September 15, 2026 at 10:40 PM
SP, Lovely imagery of October, perhaps belonging to a country side, in the midst of harvested fields, reminiscing end of the year memories with one's beloved. Should fare well in the contest. Best. Mohan.
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September 15, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Lovely rhythm. Autumn is indeed a precious time of year. Bless you, Sotto.
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September 15, 2026 at 11:29 AM
- Romantic memories... love the ending lines, Las :) - Wonderful poem :) - hugs
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