October Rains

Rain slipped in 
 sliding on the din 
just passed dark 
 came midnight sparks
before the light of morning sun,
 spits and spats, tips and taps, 
lulls and dulls,
 sputtered mutters culls,
 on the shutters closed, 
clammy, dank, and damp, 
click-clack, stamped, 
 pitter-patter tones,
 on the walk path stones;
soft and harsh, 
wind blowing scowls along the tarps
 glistening glows 
 misting the grassy rows,
October doom looms, 
 harvests wells consumed 
rain falls 
as autumn calls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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DiMino Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 10:43 AM
I think this is the best rain poem I have ever read! You get a favorite from me!
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 3:33 PM
wonderful imagery and i love the use of onomatopoeia:-) hugs Jan xx
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