October Morn Rising

like a spotted fawn
digging with a tender hoof
in the drifting leaves
morning paints an autumn song
smiles upon the vivid mists
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 4:20 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 10:13 PM
nice tanka , well done. lee
Liwayway Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Deb :)
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on the win Deb! Loved this on my first read.
Sefunmi Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 3:38 AM
Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 12:22 AM
Another fall poem. Just love them like this. Big congrats.
Mannan Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.
Tsiluma Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 11:05 PM
Beautiful scenery Deb! Congrats on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:16 PM
ahhhh personification of the dawn, one of my fav themes! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 12:42 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Deb, , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
Williams Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Deb, I love the image of this fawn in the early morning mist, well done...David
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 2:20 AM
Just beautiful, Deb - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful imagery here Deb.Love this.
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