Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- October In Gray -

October thunderclouds looming in the horizon

                        The eyes open bravely through a mist of tears

                        In reverence I pray - let the fall play the violin







03/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Alexis Y. October 6, 2019 at 1:06 PM Hi Anne-Lise, In a few words you penned a written piece. I found it be creative as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 1:11 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos October 6, 2019 at 11:47 AM Another gem dear friend - all the best in the contest. Hugs and Blessings Anne-Lise, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 12:17 PM - Many thanks my friend Jenny, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May October 4, 2019 at 5:11 PM Very nicely penned Anne...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 12:16 PM - Many thanks Joseph, for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire October 4, 2019 at 2:23 PM We have a lot of lightning and thunder here and I appreciate the bravery you display when darkness looms on the horizon. Best wishes in the contest, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 2:44 PM - I'm not so brave, in thunderstorms ... really huge natural forces - We have a lot of thunder in the fall, Carolyn - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France October 4, 2019 at 2:08 PM Anne-Lise you have penned beauty in a few wonderful words ! Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 2:45 PM - Many thanks for the beautiful comment, glad you enjoyed it D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 6:46 PM This is an amazing write my friend...i have just seen what you speak of so this one danced off the pages at me! Well done Anne-Lise :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:45 AM - Many thanks Sandra, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell October 3, 2019 at 4:50 PM A lovely piece excellently penned Anne-Lise, such wise choice of words. Poetry hugs, Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:44 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball October 3, 2019 at 3:28 PM WoW! Love this picture. October does seem stormy in some places. For sure it's a windy month. My birthday is this month but 72 sounds so old so I turned it around and I'm turning 27 again on the 14th. lol Nicely done Anne-Lise God Bless, JB Carolyn Devonshire October 4, 2019 at 2:24 PM Yes, Judy, it would be great if we could change the numbers when it comes to our age. Had to laugh!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:43 AM - 27 is a nice age, Judy :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 3, 2019 at 2:26 PM Beautiful-so well written, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:42 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry October 3, 2019 at 1:53 PM Powerful A-L and I adore the pic Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:42 AM - TS., many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green October 3, 2019 at 1:49 PM This was very deep my friend. There is something that really touched about this piece. I think this is magnificent. Best wishes in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 8:41 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)