Bill Lindsay Poet Acrostic

October - For Contest

Outside, the leaves are falling,
Carpeting my walk to school with new tactilities.
Treading the glorious kaleidoscope
Of crunching detritus, my 
Bulging eyes glisten as a hidden coin,
Exposed by my foraging feet, 
Reveals its hiding place.

Birthdate 10/06/55

Composition 08/09/15

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Skat A August 17, 2015 at 2:50 PM Hi Bill, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 17, 2015 at 11:47 AM Lovely acrostic Bill! Congrats on big win!

Faye Gibson August 15, 2015 at 4:22 PM Love this one, Bill; well crafted. A great read. Congratulations.

Charlotte Puddifoot August 15, 2015 at 4:14 PM a glimpse of childhood, this was an original one, well thought out; a skilful rendering of the acrostic form - congrats on your win in my contest!

Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 3:59 PM Dropping back with my congrats Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance August 15, 2015 at 3:35 PM A nicely traveled write, I feel like I am walking with you...well done..and grats on your win!

Jan Allison August 9, 2015 at 7:12 AM Lovely imagery Bill I still love kicking about in the autumn leaves - takes me back to my childhood:-) hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest:-) xx Jan Allison August 9, 2015 at 7:26 AM WOW What memories Bill! Hugs jan xx Bill Lindsay August 9, 2015 at 7:24 AM It was my ( and my Mum's ) birthday; I was 6 and I'd been shoved outdoors to play; the coin I found paid the rent on our home for a week!