Anna Hopper Poet Pantoum

October For Contest

The tip of Autumn and edge of fall
Summer’s song is now complete 
Cute in boots and mustard shawl
A crunch, beneath our feet

Summer’s song is now complete
We go outside, just to hear
A crunch beneath our feet
 Seasonal music to our ears

We go outside, just to hear 
Cute in boots and mustard shawl
Seasonal music to our ears
The tip of Autumn and edge of fall

10/3/19
October Pantoum 
William Kekaula

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Bobby May October 3, 2019 at 9:39 PM Your words flow like a river into the sea, this is a wonderful poem my friend!!

Gershon Wolf October 3, 2019 at 8:23 PM Light as air // delightful with flair! This is great, Anna! Here's to a winner for you. Best wishes, Gershon

Ts Poetry October 3, 2019 at 1:36 PM Autumn can be a quite beautiful time of year

Arturo Michael October 3, 2019 at 11:08 AM Nice one...

Regina Mcintosh October 3, 2019 at 10:38 AM Like Chris, I love the mustard shawl. This is a difficult form. You did well. Bless you

Chris Green October 3, 2019 at 10:35 AM This was really nice Anna. I loved the mustard shawl and boots. Best wishes in the contest

Debra Squyres October 3, 2019 at 10:28 AM Well executed pantoum... and your imagery is lovely with its sights and sounds.