Hurricane rages in Caribbean Sea 2016
I hear the heavy breathing through my trees And Acorns angering the rooftop slate Whilst winds invade the Caribbean seas The hurricane metes out the islands’ fate The sunlight plays on sturdy trunks of day And limbs, they wave, with friendly Southern charm Whilst clouds do heighten the fear on display The cataclysm of the seas does harm I see the tickle of the Autumn leaves The feast of nuts below my cushioned feet Whilst anchored palms are torn apart by thieves As lions roar, the land declares defeat 2nd place winner A poem written in iambic pentameter 10/6/2016
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