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October Death

1 Rain for weeks bruised October. The burden of bitter air spewed from the drain of my swollen yard. Already the birds had turned to pirates. I saw the night let a blind rag wing dive from a tree into the rapids of a sidewalk, rolling, crumbling like a mad leaf. 2 The afternoon had cleared and isolated my yard in cold light. Wet death had made no ceremony for the rigid squirrel. Murky death had stolen its eyes. Hard death had robbed the squirrel. I rolled the item in newspaper. Thoughtless death into the trash bag with Styrofoam and Reynolds Wrap. 3 Living wavered on a matchstick. On an evening some flickering things were extinguished.

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Date: 9/17/2021 4:17:00 PM
A superb poem, Thomas. Your opening two lines drew me in while the poem's unraveling lines of species death left such memorable images. A truly fine write that enriches. Best wishes, Brian
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Thomas Wells
Date: 9/18/2021 12:19:00 AM
You have given me some of the best comments on my poems. It makes it all worthwhile. Thanks again, Brian. PAX!
Date: 9/16/2021 12:13:00 AM
I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. Your choice of words danced across my eyes. A pleasure indeed. Shame the weather's been so terrible, may it improve.
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:49:00 AM
Hey Scott, I really am grateful for the feedback. I wrote this poem many years ago. At the time, I was living in Missouri. I am so glad others can relive what I was feeling then.

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