October Death

1
Rain for weeks
bruised October.

The burden of bitter
air spewed from the
drain of my swollen yard.

Already the birds had turned
to pirates.
I saw the night let
a blind rag wing dive
from a tree into the rapids
of a sidewalk,
rolling, crumbling like a
mad leaf.

              2
The afternoon had cleared
and isolated my yard in
cold light.

Wet death had made no
ceremony for the rigid
squirrel.

Murky death had stolen
its eyes.

Hard death had robbed
the squirrel. I rolled
the item in newspaper.

Thoughtless death into
the trash bag
with Styrofoam and Reynolds Wrap.

             3
Living wavered
on a matchstick.

On an evening some
flickering things were
                        extinguished.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sambourne Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 4:17 PM
A superb poem, Thomas. Your opening two lines drew me in while the poem's unraveling lines of species death left such memorable images. A truly fine write that enriches. Best wishes, Brian
Wells Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 12:19 AM
You have given me some of the best comments on my poems. It makes it all worthwhile. Thanks again, Brian. PAX!
Thirtyseven Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 12:13 AM
I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. Your choice of words danced across my eyes. A pleasure indeed. Shame the weather's been so terrible, may it improve.
Wells Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 1:49 AM
Hey Scott, I really am grateful for the feedback. I wrote this poem many years ago. At the time, I was living in Missouri. I am so glad others can relive what I was feeling then.
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