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October Day

lazy autumn day cowardly sun behind clouds ~~ naked trees shiver
Written October 10, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/11/2022 6:02:00 AM
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I wish my trees were naked; they are raining torrents of walnuts, acorns and leaves on my new blacktop driveway! This is truly a magnificent poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2022 9:27:00 AM
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Don't you just hate the crunch of acorns on a driveway? (chuckling)
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/10/2022 6:32:00 PM
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I agree Milton come out sun quit being a coward and warm us up a little. In the forties here in New York. Tomorrow is going to be a warmer day, can't wait. Thanks for sharing my friend...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/10/2022 6:42:00 PM
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You're welcome. Thanks for giving me hope that tomorrow will be warmer!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/10/2022 12:08:00 PM
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great image of the cowardly sun Milton, nicely done
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/10/2022 12:30:00 PM
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Thanks so much, John.

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