October Dawn-October Dusk

Dawn's light gained gently in the east,
casually erasing the remnant of a fine, misty 
fog away from a deep and enfolding night.
The eastern skies rang out, a bell choir 
peeling, in gold and strawberry light.
Shades of pastel glory painted themselves against
the last thread-gray clouds along the skyline. 
Flawless sunlight soon won the day,
as did the pristine autumn air, which embraced 
each visitor with soft, subdued whispers.

This day, from the first breaking beams of light
until the final fading glow of its passing sun, spoke of
the season's transcendent splendor.
Perceptive visitors sought to take each breath
of air with solemn purpose, opening
the eyes of their inner self; experiencing
each new and unfolding vista of life 
and nature in rapt wonder.

We are fortunate to have witnessed many
grand entrances and exits of the sun and seasons
in their deliberate arc. On this morning 
and evening, many were moved to tears 
at having been granted the sublime
privilege of knowing we are a part of
the great synchronism of life.

                               October 24th, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/1/2015 10:48:00 AM
Greetings Brian. A wonderful piece you have penned here! ;-) Congrats for having your work featured in PS home page! ;-)
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 11/16/2015 12:26:00 AM
Thanks for reading and complimenting, Teddy. I was unaware it was on the Homepage, wow. Thanks again and Be Blessed.
Date: 9/28/2015 12:01:00 PM
Brian - what a brilliantly descriptive piece. Many congrats on it's feature this week. Janette
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:24:00 AM
Sorry for not answering earlier. Was off work for 2 1/2 weeks again. I appreciate your reading and being complimentary, Janette. Be Blessed.
Date: 4/1/2015 8:35:00 AM
This is beautiful especialy when combined with a thankful heart.
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:28:00 AM
Richard, thanks for reading and complimenting in April when I posted this thing. I didn't see it and am sorry. I guess it was up on the homepage a week or so ago. Be Blessed.
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