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October Calls In Wondrous Hues

October calls in wondrous hues Autumn's finery is on display, Her final flourish, for winter's due The snow queen's touch is on the way. Autumn's finery is on display A tapestry 'fore winter's dearth, The snow queen's touch is on the way Sweet autumn shows for all she's worth. A tapestry 'fore winter's dearth Her final flourish for winter's due, Sweet autumn shows for all she's worth October calls, in wondrous hues.

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Francis Brown

Date: 3/22/2020 6:02:00 PM

nice

Gary Smith
Date: 3/22/2020 6:31:00 PM

Thank you Francis. :)

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/7/2019 9:11:00 AM

This is one of the best I've read to date, Gary with flashbacks to 'The lion, the witch and the wardrobe!) I thought that the brevity of the lines complemented the sense of the winter's imminent return.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/7/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Wendy. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2019 3:32:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Gary :) - Autumn is short ... soon the winter will come, and the snow covers our country here north :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 10/4/2019 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2019 12:42:00 PM

This is a beautiful Pantoum! Very nice :)

Gary Smith
Date: 10/4/2019 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. :)