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October Bliss

Wind whispered to trees Come dear leaves slow dance with me In your colored tapestry We'll strut on the ground It will be a ballroom show Dancing until winter snow 09/10/14

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/22/2014 10:38:00 PM

You painted a very wonderful image through your creative words on this splendid poem my very dear friend Phyllis. You did it very well too. I love it. Hope I can also try this form someday. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks as well for stopping by & I'm so glad to hear from you. Hope you're doin well. Me, w/ God's mercy, got better now 'cuz at least, we've given short sem-break from school 'though last day today;(. Thanks a lot. Many hugs for you from me. Tcare always love lots,Leonora

Daver Austin

Date: 10/20/2014 3:46:00 PM

Enjoyed. Put a little music to that dance, eh? Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/21/2014 9:22:00 PM

thank you daver

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 6:54:00 PM

Excellent job, Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:33:00 PM

thank you Maurice

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:09:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Phyllis!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:33:00 PM

thank you Upms

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:37:00 AM

dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:33:00 PM

thanks for your second look Jan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 2:06:00 AM

Lovely write on October bliss, Phyllis, congrats

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:32:00 PM

thank you Dr. Ram

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:41:00 AM

So nice to see you entered my contest, dear Phyllis. I really like your personification of wind dancing with leaves. Congrats to you.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:32:00 PM

thank you Andrea for my placement in your contest

Darlene Gifford

Date: 10/9/2014 1:16:00 PM

falling leaves make autumn a colorful dress for the dance!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:31:00 PM

thank you Darlene

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful Sedoka - I hope this dances its way to a podium place:-) hugs Jan xxx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:31:00 PM

thank you Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 11:37:00 AM

- This fits very well at my place today, dear Phyllis - There are strong winds, really dark skies, lots of rain and thunder !!! - AUTUMN !!!! - A great poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/14/2014 3:31:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise