October Bliss

Wind whispered to trees
Come dear leaves slow dance with me
In your colored tapestry
We'll strut on the ground
It will be a ballroom show
Dancing until winter snow

09/10/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gasun Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 10:38 PM
You painted a very wonderful image through your creative words on this splendid poem my very dear friend Phyllis. You did it very well too. I love it. Hope I can also try this form someday. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks as well for stopping by & I'm so glad to hear from you. Hope you're doin well. Me, w/ God's mercy, got better now 'cuz at least, we've given short sem-break from school 'though last day today;(. Thanks a lot. Many hugs for you from me. Tcare always love lots,Leonora
Austin Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Enjoyed. Put a little music to that dance, eh? Love, daver
Babcock Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:22 PM
thank you daver
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Excellent job, Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM
thank you Maurice
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Phyllis!
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM
thank you Upms
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:37 AM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM
thanks for your second look Jan
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Lovely write on October bliss, Phyllis, congrats
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:32 PM
thank you Dr. Ram
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 12:41 AM
So nice to see you entered my contest, dear Phyllis. I really like your personification of wind dancing with leaves. Congrats to you.
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:32 PM
thank you Andrea for my placement in your contest
Gifford Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 1:16 PM
falling leaves make autumn a colorful dress for the dance!
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:31 PM
thank you Darlene
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Beautiful Sedoka - I hope this dances its way to a podium place:-) hugs Jan xxx
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:31 PM
thank you Jan
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:37 AM
- This fits very well at my place today, dear Phyllis - There are strong winds, really dark skies, lots of rain and thunder !!! - AUTUMN !!!! - A great poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 3:31 PM
thank you Anne Lise
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