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October Bliss

Cool October air playfully tickles the leaves making them sway with itself before each drops down Ha! chameleons feel naked they quickly change their color Date: 6.10.2014 Andrea Dietrich's contest October Bliss or November Dreams

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/15/2015 3:42:00 PM

Enjoyed this colour alluded morphing into opportunity x immunity country write, Mohan..'

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/21/2014 11:43:00 PM

The chameleon changing color made all the difference. Beautiful poetry.Congrats.

David Mohn

Date: 10/12/2014 7:34:00 PM

Very clever Mohan...congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thanx David.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/12/2014 5:25:00 PM

lovely picture beautifully penned

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:00:00 AM

Liam, thanx for appreciating.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/12/2014 2:58:00 PM

Mohan, this is such a beautiful piece with incredible imagery! No wonder you are a top winner! Congratulations, my friend, on your well-deserved win! Pandita

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:01:00 AM

Pandita, thanx for your encouragement. Mohan

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:03:00 AM

thanx Maurice.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:12:00 AM

Very witty take Mohan! Congrats on huge win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:06:00 AM

Upma, thanx.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 6:47:00 AM

Very enjoyable sedoka, Mohan...and I especially liked the final 2 lines! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:04:00 AM

Paul, thanx for enjoying and appreciating. Mohan

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:34:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Mohan:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/15/2014 11:06:00 AM

Jan, thanx for encouragement. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 2:01:00 AM

Nice use of metaphor, Mohan, congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 4:23:00 AM

Thanks for your encouragement, Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:35:00 AM

Mohan, the chameleon added into this one was so unexpected and cute, and as I understand sedoka, that gentle twist is part of the form! Congrats in my contest. I really enjoyed this one.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 4:26:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for my placement in your contest. I feel it has drawn out the best of imagination from all winners. Mohan

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/6/2014 4:43:00 PM

Nice metaphor here - very clever! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 4:27:00 AM

Thanks for liking my poem Anish.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2014 12:02:00 PM

I have never tried this form - wonderful imagery I love the reference to the chameleon changing colour - very clever:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 4:30:00 AM

Jan, thanks for your encouragement. Mohan

Len Gasun

Date: 10/6/2014 9:59:00 AM

This is a brilliant write inspired by the theme my dear friend Mohan. I love the great image of the October Bliss! Great job! I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by leaving me a nice comment on one of my poems! More pow'r and blessings! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 4:29:00 AM

Thanks Leonora for appreciating my muse. Mohan