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October Bliss

Cool October air 
playfully tickles the leaves
making them sway with itself 
before each drops down   
Ha! chameleons feel naked
they quickly change their color 

Date: 6.10.2014
Andrea Dietrich's contest
October Bliss or November Dreams

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Joe Maverick

February 15, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Enjoyed this colour alluded morphing into opportunity x immunity country write, Mohan..'

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

October 21, 2014 at 11:43 PM

The chameleon changing color made all the difference. Beautiful poetry.Congrats.

David Mohn

October 12, 2014 at 7:34 PM

Very clever Mohan...congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 10:59 AM

Thanx David.

Liam Mcdaid

October 12, 2014 at 5:25 PM

lovely picture beautifully penned

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:00 AM

Liam, thanx for appreciating.

Pandita Sietesantos

October 12, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Mohan, this is such a beautiful piece with incredible imagery! No wonder you are a top winner! Congratulations, my friend, on your well-deserved win! Pandita

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:01 AM

Pandita, thanx for your encouragement. Mohan

Maurice Yvonne

October 12, 2014 at 2:53 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:03 AM

thanx Maurice.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 12, 2014 at 9:12 AM

Very witty take Mohan! Congrats on huge win!

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:06 AM

Upma, thanx.

Paul Callus

October 12, 2014 at 6:47 AM

Very enjoyable sedoka, Mohan...and I especially liked the final 2 lines! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:04 AM

Paul, thanx for enjoying and appreciating. Mohan

Jan Allison

October 12, 2014 at 5:34 AM

dropping back with my congrats Mohan:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani

October 15, 2014 at 11:06 AM

Jan, thanx for encouragement. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 12, 2014 at 2:01 AM

Nice use of metaphor, Mohan, congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani

October 12, 2014 at 4:23 AM

Thanks for your encouragement, Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2014 at 12:35 AM

Mohan, the chameleon added into this one was so unexpected and cute, and as I understand sedoka, that gentle twist is part of the form! Congrats in my contest. I really enjoyed this one.

Mohan Chutani

October 12, 2014 at 4:26 AM

Andrea, thanks for my placement in your contest. I feel it has drawn out the best of imagination from all winners. Mohan

Matthew Anish

October 6, 2014 at 4:43 PM

Nice metaphor here - very clever! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Mohan Chutani

October 12, 2014 at 4:27 AM

Thanks for liking my poem Anish.

Jan Allison

October 6, 2014 at 12:02 PM

I have never tried this form - wonderful imagery I love the reference to the chameleon changing colour - very clever:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Mohan Chutani

October 12, 2014 at 4:30 AM

Jan, thanks for your encouragement. Mohan

Len Gasun

October 6, 2014 at 9:59 AM

This is a brilliant write inspired by the theme my dear friend Mohan. I love the great image of the October Bliss! Great job! I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by leaving me a nice comment on one of my poems! More pow'r and blessings! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Mohan Chutani

October 12, 2014 at 4:29 AM

Thanks Leonora for appreciating my muse. Mohan

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