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Only now I realise that summer has finished Cold mornings and foggy skies The early evening light diminished Orange leaves dance like butterflies Baked pumpkins, carved faces Excited children, ghostly places Reward with treats or a trick in store. Tricia Lucas-Clarke For contest - Fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 11:23:00 PM
Acrostic and rhyme. good. Great win. Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:36:00 PM
Yes, that's fall. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,tricia
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:52:00 PM
Hey, wonderful, this! Liked the unforced rhyme- natural flow of time (summer first line, last day of october last line) and you baked those pumpkins, too! Congrats on the win! Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:49:00 PM
hey Tricia congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:13:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative description of October, my favorite month, and the children preparing for Halloween, Tricia. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:30:00 AM
Tricia, Congratulations on your second place in the Carol's "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in a worthy place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congrats Tricia on second place win with this cool write on Fall luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Tricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:12:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Tricia. Love, Carol
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