Tricia Lucas-Clarke Poet Acrostic

October

Only now I realise that summer has finished
Cold mornings and foggy skies
The early evening light diminished
Orange leaves dance like butterflies
Baked pumpkins, carved faces
Excited children, ghostly places
Reward with treats or a trick in store.

Tricia Lucas-Clarke
For contest -  Fall

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Joyce Johnson September 8, 2011 at 11:23 PM Acrostic and rhyme. good. Great win. Joyce

Lee Ramage September 7, 2011 at 11:36 PM Yes, that's fall. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2011 at 9:53 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,tricia

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 7:57 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Cyndi Macmillan September 7, 2011 at 4:52 PM Hey, wonderful, this! Liked the unforced rhyme- natural flow of time (summer first line, last day of october last line) and you baked those pumpkins, too! Congrats on the win! Cyndi

David Williams September 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM hey Tricia congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2011 at 1:13 PM Enjoyed your creative description of October, my favorite month, and the children preparing for Halloween, Tricia. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman September 7, 2011 at 11:30 AM Tricia, Congratulations on your second place in the Carol's "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in a worthy place. Agape, Moses

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 11:05 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM Congrats Tricia on second place win with this cool write on Fall luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest Tricia. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown September 2, 2011 at 7:12 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Tricia. Love, Carol