October

October smiled sweetly
as colours began to change
from  her green dress of summer
she changed into a multi coloured layer
as she spun around in glee
she showed off her ware
reds, oranges and golds
bright and bold
for eyes to behold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Hello Phyllis … while you prepare for winter, we are greening up with a multitude of colours with blooms, and of course; warmer weather - thank you Phyllis - stay safe and warm - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Beautifully written Phyl. I can see her swirling around blowing the leaves. Love it. God Bless, JB
Hinshaw Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Splendid verse, Phyllis - you write of my favorite season of the year - Bob
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:28 AM
What gorgeous imagery! Beautiful metaphor!
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:04 AM
- Yes, a really beautiful dress, Phyllis :) - Hope everything is well with you ... enjoy the autumn ... it has arrived :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 10:15 AM
I could see her whirling with all the delight of Autumn!
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