Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

October

Octobers are made of
Halloween Moons,
children in costumes 
trick or treating,
carmel apples, hay rides 
down country roads,
bonfires with close friends,
smells of pumpkin spices,
orange ,red, and brown
leaves crunch underfoot,
and the crisp breeze of fall
This is my October

Wc:44
Contrest: October in 45 words or less
Sponsor Caren Krutsinger
Date 10/3/2019

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John Fleming October 24, 2019 at 10:13 AM I am not surprised in the least you got a first place finish with this little gem, Brenda; I was just going to comment how good it really is...when, looking down, I happened upon the various congratulations -- deservedly so! Very well done you! In great affection. :) john

Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 7:48 AM Congratulations, Brenda! October comes to life! Brenda Chiri October 23, 2019 at 11:07 PM Kim thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf October 22, 2019 at 8:48 PM ---Reads/sounds/feels like a perfect October, Brenda :) … And many congratulations on your first-place win in Caren's contest. Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri October 23, 2019 at 8:22 AM Gershon thank you so much! I have missed your comments!;)

L. J. Carber October 22, 2019 at 10:20 AM Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun--sorry if I sound pedantic: old English teachers never die, we just move to Poetry Soup.] ] Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 10:30 AM I appreciate the heads up very much so! Thanks again!;)

L. J. Carber October 22, 2019 at 10:16 AM Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun.] Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 10:19 AM Ha your right thank you so much!;)

Beautiful Scars October 22, 2019 at 6:46 AM how did I miss this one? Amazing as always sweet lady :) congrats -luloo Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 7:16 AM Thank you Laura! I appreciate your comment and congrats!;)

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2019 at 7:43 PM that is MY october too, Brenda. BIG congrats for your first place win. Brenda Chiri October 22, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thank you Andrea I appreciate it very much!;)

David Drowley October 21, 2019 at 4:24 PM 'Brenda, Congratulations on this captivating prize winner! David Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 5:07 PM David thank you so much!;)

Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 3:17 PM Bravo for your gold medal win, Brenda. So sweet! Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 5:06 PM Thank you so much Line!;)

Heidi Sands October 21, 2019 at 12:00 PM Very nice Brenda! Congratulations for your top win :) Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 2:16 PM Thank you Heidi thank you so much!;)

Janice Canerdy October 21, 2019 at 11:43 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Brenda. So Lovely! Janice Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 2:16 PM Thank you Janice;)

Charlie Knowlton October 21, 2019 at 11:36 AM Beautiful Brenda. You covered all of what October is in few words. Congrats. Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 11:37 AM Thank you Charlie!;)

Laura Leiser October 21, 2019 at 10:11 AM You paint the picture well with your words regarding October, Brenda! Congrats to you! :) Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 11:30 AM Laura thank you so much!;)

Winged Warrior October 21, 2019 at 9:56 AM Who's # 1 ?...Congrats!! sissy...beautiful Oct, eve...(((Warning! Warning!)))...(((Danger! Will Robinson)))... you're the first to know...your devious bro bro is conceptualizing something for the soup peeps lol...coming soon to a soup bowl near you...all my delinquent love...bro bro Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 11:30 AM Ohhh bro bro anything you have to write has me excited to read!;) thank you;)

Regina Mcintosh October 4, 2019 at 1:22 AM This is a wonderful October... I love fall so much. Best wishes in the contest and Bless you always Brenda Chiri October 4, 2019 at 12:02 PM Regina thanks so much!;)

Paul Callus October 3, 2019 at 5:04 PM You have truly captured the spirit of autumn, Brenda...and in just 44 words! Hope you're keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri October 3, 2019 at 9:30 PM Thank you so much Paul I look forward to your visits!;) And I'm doing fine right now thank you from asking;)