October

Octobers are made of Halloween Moons, children in costumes trick or treating, carmel apples, hay rides down country roads, bonfires with close friends, smells of pumpkin spices, orange ,red, and brown leaves crunch underfoot, and the crisp breeze of fall This is my October Wc:44 Contrest: October in 45 words or less Sponsor Caren Krutsinger Date 10/3/2019

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John Fleming

Date: 10/24/2019 10:13:00 AM

I am not surprised in the least you got a first place finish with this little gem, Brenda; I was just going to comment how good it really is...when, looking down, I happened upon the various congratulations -- deservedly so! Very well done you! In great affection. :) john

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/23/2019 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations, Brenda! October comes to life!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 11:07:00 PM

Kim thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/22/2019 8:48:00 PM

---Reads/sounds/feels like a perfect October, Brenda :) … And many congratulations on your first-place win in Caren's contest. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:22:00 AM

Gershon thank you so much! I have missed your comments!;)

L. J. Carber

Date: 10/22/2019 10:20:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun--sorry if I sound pedantic: old English teachers never die, we just move to Poetry Soup.] ]

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 10:30:00 AM

I appreciate the heads up very much so! Thanks again!;)

L. J. Carber

Date: 10/22/2019 10:16:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun.]

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 10:19:00 AM

Ha your right thank you so much!;)

Lu Loo

Date: 10/22/2019 6:46:00 AM

how did I miss this one? Amazing as always sweet lady :) congrats -luloo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Laura! I appreciate your comment and congrats!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2019 7:43:00 PM

that is MY october too, Brenda. BIG congrats for your first place win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Andrea I appreciate it very much!;)

David Drowley

Date: 10/21/2019 4:24:00 PM

'Brenda, Congratulations on this captivating prize winner! David

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 5:07:00 PM

David thank you so much!;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2019 3:17:00 PM

Bravo for your gold medal win, Brenda. So sweet!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Line!;)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2019 12:00:00 PM

Very nice Brenda! Congratulations for your top win :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Heidi thank you so much!;)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/21/2019 11:43:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Brenda. So Lovely! Janice

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Janice;)

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 10/21/2019 11:36:00 AM

Beautiful Brenda. You covered all of what October is in few words. Congrats.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Charlie!;)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/21/2019 10:11:00 AM

You paint the picture well with your words regarding October, Brenda! Congrats to you! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 11:30:00 AM

Laura thank you so much!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/21/2019 9:56:00 AM

Who's # 1 ?...Congrats!! sissy...beautiful Oct, eve...(((Warning! Warning!)))...(((Danger! Will Robinson)))... you're the first to know...your devious bro bro is conceptualizing something for the soup peeps lol...coming soon to a soup bowl near you...all my delinquent love...bro bro

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 11:30:00 AM

Ohhh bro bro anything you have to write has me excited to read!;) thank you;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2019 1:22:00 AM

This is a wonderful October... I love fall so much. Best wishes in the contest and Bless you always

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 12:02:00 PM

Regina thanks so much!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2019 5:04:00 PM

You have truly captured the spirit of autumn, Brenda...and in just 44 words! Hope you're keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/3/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul I look forward to your visits!;) And I'm doing fine right now thank you from asking;)