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October

Octobers are made of
Halloween Moons,
children in costumes 
trick or treating,
carmel apples, hay rides 
down country roads,
bonfires with close friends,
smells of pumpkin spices,
orange ,red, and brown
leaves crunch underfoot,
and the crisp breeze of fall
This is my October

Wc:44
Contrest: October in 45 words or less
Sponsor Caren Krutsinger
Date 10/3/2019

Copyright © Brenda Chiri | Year Posted 2019

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John Fleming Date: 10/24/2019 10:13:00 AM I am not surprised in the least you got a first place finish with this little gem, Brenda; I was just going to comment how good it really is...when, looking down, I happened upon the various congratulations -- deservedly so! Very well done you! In great affection. :) john Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2019 7:48:00 AM Congratulations, Brenda! October comes to life! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/23/2019 11:07:00 PM Kim thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/22/2019 8:48:00 PM ---Reads/sounds/feels like a perfect October, Brenda :) … And many congratulations on your first-place win in Caren's contest. Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/23/2019 8:22:00 AM Gershon thank you so much! I have missed your comments!;)

L. J. Carber Date: 10/22/2019 10:20:00 AM Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun--sorry if I sound pedantic: old English teachers never die, we just move to Poetry Soup.] ] Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/22/2019 10:30:00 AM I appreciate the heads up very much so! Thanks again!;)

L. J. Carber Date: 10/22/2019 10:16:00 AM Congrats on your 1st place, Brenda! [I think there's a typo as you seem to indicate the plural, 'Octobers' and not a possessive singular form of the noun.] Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/22/2019 10:19:00 AM Ha your right thank you so much!;)

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/22/2019 6:46:00 AM how did I miss this one? Amazing as always sweet lady :) congrats -luloo Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/22/2019 7:16:00 AM Thank you Laura! I appreciate your comment and congrats!;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/21/2019 7:43:00 PM that is MY october too, Brenda. BIG congrats for your first place win. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/22/2019 7:17:00 AM Thank you Andrea I appreciate it very much!;)

David Drowley Date: 10/21/2019 4:24:00 PM 'Brenda, Congratulations on this captivating prize winner! David Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 5:07:00 PM David thank you so much!;)

Line Gauthier Date: 10/21/2019 3:17:00 PM Bravo for your gold medal win, Brenda. So sweet! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 5:06:00 PM Thank you so much Line!;)

Heidi Sands Date: 10/21/2019 12:00:00 PM Very nice Brenda! Congratulations for your top win :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 PM Thank you Heidi thank you so much!;)

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/21/2019 11:43:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Brenda. So Lovely! Janice Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 PM Thank you Janice;)

Charlie Knowlton Date: 10/21/2019 11:36:00 AM Beautiful Brenda. You covered all of what October is in few words. Congrats. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 11:37:00 AM Thank you Charlie!;)

Laura Leiser Date: 10/21/2019 10:11:00 AM You paint the picture well with your words regarding October, Brenda! Congrats to you! :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 11:30:00 AM Laura thank you so much!;)

Winged Warrior Date: 10/21/2019 9:56:00 AM Who's # 1 ?...Congrats!! sissy...beautiful Oct, eve...(((Warning! Warning!)))...(((Danger! Will Robinson)))... you're the first to know...your devious bro bro is conceptualizing something for the soup peeps lol...coming soon to a soup bowl near you...all my delinquent love...bro bro Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/21/2019 11:30:00 AM Ohhh bro bro anything you have to write has me excited to read!;) thank you;)

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/4/2019 1:22:00 AM This is a wonderful October... I love fall so much. Best wishes in the contest and Bless you always Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/4/2019 12:02:00 PM Regina thanks so much!;)

Paul Callus Date: 10/3/2019 5:04:00 PM You have truly captured the spirit of autumn, Brenda...and in just 44 words! Hope you're keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 10/3/2019 9:30:00 PM Thank you so much Paul I look forward to your visits!;) And I'm doing fine right now thank you from asking;)